Important note!!! Do check!!!

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Jan 10, 2015

Important note!!! Do check!!! (By Starmuski) (Thanked: 4 times)

Hey reader of Broken apart and Broken flower!

I have been tired of writing and asking for coments so am ending the story here! Am DELETING both stories

No, the only reason is not just that because I write for myself too so I would have continued it but than I noticed that my stories are not even satisfying me they are not going as I planned once maybe due to lack of interest as I was actually writing for myself amid of my own personal problems

Some one told me that write for yourselves, your satisfaction not to impress others and there i found am neither satisfying myself nor my readers as there are no response from ANYONE not even one coment yeah I get but after writing so many chapters so am ending it altogether!

I will rewrite them for sure so please don't copy my titles or storyline if you read!

And am no where going to post story here because I know the response so am not gonna write it here

Thank you

Starmuski!

Jan 11, 2015

DEVIL's LOVE (By Farakhan) (Thanked: 4 times)

    First of all thank you guys for your suppport.I want to thank you guys who read and

    commented and press thank u botton.


  CHAPTER 2:

                                  

             She ran to call doctor , the clinic was full of patients.

She went toward doctor and asked him: CAN YOU COME WITH ME, NOW?

 

The doctor was shocked by her gesture, he knew her and he felt that there is something serious and 

there is not use to ask something to her because he knew that when she is in tenshen she will forget

 everything, he chuckled at this thought, Infect she is like his own daughter.



“WE SHOULD LEAVE NOW” he said when he saw her murmuring something to herself.

“YEAH, SURE” she said hurriedly.

They reached her home, doctor checked that unknown guy.

He was amazed, he do not knew him but he knew that there is

Something in this guy which is very rare.

That masculine body full of wounds but still his aroma is different.

He checked him and once again he was amazed that he has wounds almost every part of his body but 

still he is alive, he brushed all these thoughts and checked him and dressed his wounds he then:

“HE HAS A DEEP WOUND IN HIS HEAD AND THAT NEED TO CURE SOON OR ELSE HE MAY BECOME

ABNORMAL”.(I have hear and also knew some incidence that after a sever accident the patient 

become abnormal like mental or may loss his voice, eye sight and his sanity it is very difficult stage I 

knew it, arnav is going to be fine so don’t worry about himJ)



 


Khushi become numb after hearing all this , she don’t know why  her heart is beating so fast 

“HEY GOD PLZ HELP HIM” her heart Prey for him unknown to her.

Doctor went away after giving some instructions.

 

 

 

Khushi  went near that stranger watch him keenly, she realize that he is indeed very handsome with perfect features.

She was oogling  at him shamleslly  “WHAT ARE YOU DOING KHUSHI ,YOU BECOME SO


SHAMLESS, YOU CANNOT OOGLE AT HIM SHAMLESS GIRL’” she scold herself.

She came to senses after hearing her nephew calling for her and she went out to see him.

In the room the man is lying unconscious unknown to fact that he is donated by a new life, where there

 will be no darkness, only love and peace will exist but for that he has to struggle hard, no hard but

 very hard.

(Khushi’s nephew name is Aaditya Gupta.)

 

 

 

 

 

Khushi was very upset with the events happening around her.

She herself don’t know what is happening to her, “HE IS JUST A STRANGER KHUSHI FORSET ABOUT


 HIM YOU HAVE TO DO A LOT OF WORK JUST DON’T THINK ABOUT ANY STRANGER.

  

“IS HE REALLY A STRANGER ?” she asked to herself but she has no answer.

 

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She brushed off all the thoughts and went to her friend priti’s house to tell her about that stranger

While going toward her friend’s house, she was just smiling, she don’t know the reason of that smile

.

“Ohh, MY SMILING ANGEL, MEIN SADQEY JAON AISY KHUBSURAT  MUSKURAHAT KE. WHAT


 HAPPEN TO YOU MY DEAR” priti said as she saw her smiling at herself, she guess something is 

wrong with her, she never saw her like this, is this love she saw in her eyes.

Khushi smiled at her and said: “THAT STRANGER IS VERY HANDSOME YOU KNOW PRITI” priti

 

looked at her keenly as if trying to read her expression and than asked “WHAT HAPPEN, WHO IS


 THIS STRANGER WHO TOOK AWAY THE BEATIFUL HEART OF A REALY PREETY LADY AWAY


 AT  ONE SIGHT”

That’s it ,she understand her meaning started chasing her.

   "once again thank you guys."


Jan 11, 2015

sorry.... (By Starmuski) (Thanked: 3 times)

Papa and Arshi_shreya, am really sorry but I can't help now! The result I got for writting for hours was dissapointed infact beyond it but somewhere i was habitual as my writing skills are not much good and am trying to imrpove also!

But the real reason I deleted them is that I myself was not satisfied by the way story was going! I had decided it some other way but it went with flow and didn't satisified me so I rewrite them again but not on this forum am sorry! I'll write it on other forum and if you guys are interested so I will give you link once I start to write, i Can't help more

Sorry

Starmuski

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