Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!!

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Jun 10, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anaya)

hey; i am starting my story . this is very different one. actully i read a novel , that was a supreb love story.i get this concept from that story.                

 

                                                      here the story begins....     

In Lucknow

 

                            The story starts when a 15 year old girl looking after her illed mother. her mother is suffring the second stage of canser. they have no one in this world. her name is khushi, a bubly girl.she is studying in 6th std. but now she can't continue her study bcs of her mother illness. she don't know about her father anything, she asked garima(moter) so many times. but she not get any answer from her mother.

 

                                 but now garima want to tell kushi about her father.Bcs she don't how many will she able to leave.so she wanted kushi in safe hands.she also don't know it will be good or bad.Apart from that thougt she tell kushi about her father.

Garima : khushi beta, i want to tell you somthing.

khushi : yes amma, tell me.

Garima : u always want to know ur father,right.(khushi nods). ur babuji is a great person. his

               name is shashi guptha. your nani(garima's mother) is servent of his house and i also

              go to help her. and he is falling in love with me. in first i aviod him bcs of fear about th

              eir status but afterwards i also love with him. we secreately meet.i faith in him that 

              i give my self to him before marrige. (tears flows from her eyes)



kushi : amma please, don't cry. it hurts u to say me then don't told me after what happen.i 

           don't want to know.(she also cried and hugged garima)

Garima : no beta, i want to tell you everything. after some months nani come to know . she 

             scold me and also told me forget him. but i can't. he also don't want to leave me. but 

             after some days i came to know that i am carrying you. i go to him tell this, but i am 

            seeing that his marrige fixed with his faters pater's daghter. iam hell shocked. i don't

            know what to do.(more tears come from her eyes). after nani comes to know about 

            my pregnancy,she broke down. after getting some courrage we tell to his mother. but

             she has not helping up, apart from this she beg me to leave his son and let him a pea

            cdful life and i also want that. so i decided to let him free from me and we shifted here

 

kushi had no words for this. she kept numb. she don't how to console her mother. she know how much she suffer to looking for her. her nani died when she is in 6 th std. and now her mother also ............



what will happen after khushi's life ..............


how she met her father or is he alive............


when our hero come to her life................

            and please vote for me


                                                    



 

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Jun 10, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anaya)

Thanks to all supporting ,friends. here yhe nxt update. after that day garima's condition worsened. khushi wanted to admitt her hospital.but garima not ready for it(she know there is no use).one day two of them went to temple.garima prayed for her khushis future,till now she don't know if anything happened her who look her daughter.khushi prayed to give amma back as before. how devimayya reject such an innocent prays.at the time around 55 years old lady come and collidated with garimma who just turned after her pray. both of them shocked. garima : apppp!! lady : garima tum garima : madumathiji madhu : hai re nandakoshor u remember my name. thats great. we all are looking for u past these years and u here, in lucknow. u even know whats the condition of sashi babuwa after u throw him away and come here. garima watde to say so many things. but no any word come from her throught. khushi till now keep asilent spcter. after seeher mothers condition she ask her khushi : amma who is this ? madhu: amma . thatmeans u married, how could u do this to my babuwa. till now he is waiting for u anu happy with ur family. garima want to deny, but she can'tand she can't belive that shashji till wait her, that means shee did wrong by away from and almost hide his daughter from him. other hand khushi can't take it easily that some one bleame her amma so she ratrorred. khushi : hey! i don't know who are u , but as i say my amma was loved only one oerson and till now sha loved him,shshi guptha my babuji. madumathi can't belive her ears.but unknown to them one more prson heard it all. man : that means i have a daughter!!!! soory for short update .... cont very soonnn pls

Jun 10, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anaya)

ooppss. iam really very sooy for my careless. first i consider kushi as 12 year but later i change it as 15 year. but forgot to change. as i said khushi is now 10 th std and she can't continue her study becase of garimas condition. once again so sorry.forgiv me

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Jun 10, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anaya)

shashi have different emotions feel in one time that very thought of getting his life back. but destiny had other plans.he moved to them and that garima faited. khushi held garimma and tears flow from her eyes uncontrollably. after some time she felt a hand on her sholder, saw sashi. she feel it that "my babuji". shashi : be.... beta... khushi : bab..babuji... ammmaaa... she , what will happen to her? shashi : no.. no beta nothing will happen. i am here na. don't worry. (khushi nods) shashi,madumathi and khushi take garimma to hospital. she is in ICU. after some time docter come and told them that her condition was very bad, she wanted to meet shashi. but shashi can't get anything. shashi : doc. what happen to her ? doc : u don't she is in 3 rd stage of canser,we can't help it's too late. we are sorry for that. before some time he think that this is hi best day it turned as a very worsened day. he think that i am this much bad that didn't get any happy in my life. other hand kushi cried her whole heart, madumathi can't help hugged her and assured as everything going to fine. shashi went to ICU.tears were formed in the corner of his eyes. but he controlled and moved near to garimma. he can't see her like that,he called shashi: ga.....gari..garimma.(garimma opened her eyes) garimma : (put on the oxegen mask) sha..sha... shashi:( nods his head negatively) don't say anything u will be fine garimma nods and ask "khushi". shashi can't get. garimma : our...... daughter.through her eyes her says she wanted to see her.nurse called khushi and she get in. she become paled by continous crying.garimma hold shashi's right hand and put on kushi's hand and a smile thats it they realised she is no more. khushi cried bitterly holding her.shashi don't say anything went to th lounge and sit on a chair. madumathi also go to IcU. Garimma's body taken , khushi and madumathi come out from icu and moved to call shashi. madumahti called him but he doesn't moved. madumathi shake him then he fell on the floor, that was another shock of that poor souls. the death of garimma is unbearble for shashi, he wait her for till that time he met her but when he met she is no more. this made a heart attack for him and he also leave with garimma.they don't get a chance to live together but they dies together.this will made them together.but a poor soul lost her parrents same day it is more painable than anything. madumathi also no better condition. she and her babuwa come for a yathra it end like this. the funerals of both of them did . madumathi now living with khushi in lucknow,both of them tried move on their life but t seems very difficult.according to khushi garimma was her world, she loves her more than anything.other hand madumathi is a widow, her husband sekhar was lived in delhi and after marriage she also settled there. but 6 months after marriage her husband met an accident and died.after his death to live there was difficult thing(reason revealed as time come) so she go shashi house. so she her no one in the world apart from her sashi babuwa. now he no more but no she have prescious doll with. so she is very happy, khushi also comfortable with her.lives move on like that . After 3 years : in these three years both of had a strong bond. khushi now incomplete with hre buaji.buaji (madumathi) also like that her sanka devi is her world now. khushi do craziness only to her buaji , to the society she is a shy girl, not much talktive and so on.but to her buaji she is titalia, sanka devi pagali ,gudia ans so on. they opened a sweat shop . the live become moved smoothly, but alas all that scattered in one day. one day before of her parents 3 death anniversary, buaji slipped from a stool to hang the photo to the wall and her leg springled. she can't walk properly. they consult doc. and he says rest for two days. but they have to do puja for shashi and garimma. buaji : hai re nandakishor what to do now? i can't walk properly how i go to puja for temple. khushi: don't worry buaji, u take rest and i will go there alone. buaji: areeee ! are u mad . how u gone alone titalia. the temple much far from there . khushi: it's ok buaji devimayya he na.(khushi is a full devotie of devimayya and DMis her best friend) buaji: but gudia............... khushi: no no buaji , i will go alone . that's final and now u take full rest and i will look after the shop. buaji: ok bittiya as u wish. but one thing............. don't much eat jellebii.(jellebi is the favourate of khusi) so thats only why buaji teased her. khushi: hhhhhhh ( pouted) what buaji.... me asa thodi na khithi he(i am not much have jilebi like that) buaji: (put her hand on chest) haire NK hamara sas ab ruk jayegi, phir se ase bath kar dia tho(my breath will stop when you say like that again) but that word prik khushis heart in no time she hugged her dear buaji as her life dependend on her. khushi: no buaji don't say that again. i can't live without u. u are my world no. don't leave me. she sobbed. buaji:(her eyes also welled up, but she controlled and says) hai pagali where i did go. i am not going any where. don't cry beta. khushi: promise me that u will not say that again buaji : promise... after the puja she left the temple. it is quite late that the busses are went out. she don't know what to do now what will happen to her life..................... will hero come to save her.............. to know ahout that stay tuneeeee............ i try to update soon........

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Jun 11, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anaya)

khushi don't know what to do. she tried to hire a taxi but one one will get. she wait for some time for a taxi but time is going.she afriad think about the condition of her buaji.on the other hand buaji hell frightened for the delay of khushi.she can't do anything.one of her neighbour come there to see madumathi . (please bear my hindi) vimala: madhu, tumare tabiyath teek hena tum ithana paresan kyu lag rahe ho? khushi kaha he ? kai dikhayi nai tha aj. koi chali gayi thi kya? ab kaha he? madhu : she went a temple to do puja for her parents. vimala : oh! par ab tho ithani rath ho jaya na, wo ab tak kyu nai ayi? madhu : arre! aye honge bache todi ne kya ithene darnekeleye (actully buaji die for every passed time, but she doesn't want to show vimala.) vimala : teeke , apko koi problem nai he tho me kyu paresan karu. par tumhare muh se dikhayi derse ki tum kithana paresan lag rah ho. madhu : ab app kyu aye , koi kam he kya? vimala : nai nai muge kuch nai chahiye, me bas ye puchana aya ki thumhari pair me dard kaise he? madhu : ab pahle se bahther he, or koi nai tho ab app chaliya. hume kuch kam hai, kal milthe he. vimala : teekkeee............ madhu : hai re NK hamari bachi ka raksha karna. khushi is now hell afried that some drunked mens obligied her head to toe. this made her very uncomfortable. so she started to walk, at her behind those mens. she now startedto run.those mens followed her. she some how escaped from them. but the place is not safe for her.so she dicided to move on. at the time she felt a hand on her sholder,she shocked like hell . she think........................ that was those goons. but her surprise ..................................................................................... an old lady : beta app waha kya karthe ? yes that was an old lady , khushi hide behind her house . lady took khshi inside ans give her water. then khushi narreted what happened. old lady : koi bath nai. app yah ruk sakthe he. yaha mere ilawa koi nai he,bilkul chintha mat keejiye beta. naniji : hum tho humari buaji bare me sochkar ithna paresan he. wo ab tak kuch kha nai hogi or mere bare me sochkar rath bar rothe honge. he DM ab hum kya kare? old lady : sab teek ho jayega , kal app jakkar ye patha hogi tho wo zarur manloongi. ab ek ka karo so jawo. bahuth tak chuke he kal milthe he. khushi : hum chal rahe he naniji. (she take bless from her) old lady : geethi rahiyo bitiya. khushi : buaji hamari baath tho suniyena. slapppp(buaji slapped her) buaji : chup bilkul chup , tum nai janthi rath me kaise beet raha tha.( buaji in hell angry) vimala : muje tabi patha tha ki tum gis tarhi ladki ho. ab tak ache bane ka natak karthi rahthi na tu? khushi can't belive her ears what her neibhours abuse her. madumathi also can't take it easily that enyone can abouse her titaliya. so she dragged khushi in the house. her angry subsideied a bit after see khushis tears. she have full faith her bitiya. she slapped khushi only for the tention she suffered. now she ready hear , so she asked and khushi said all. buaji hugged her and console her and even say sorry for the slap.but khushi don't mind that. after that incident all are avoid to khushi also madumathi.and also some of them spread the rurmour that that day she went with her boy frind.the situation worsened day by day. at last madumathi decided to shift from there, that is only way of kushi's future. next day she said to khushi buaji : bitiya hum soch rahe he ki hum yaha se chali jaye ? khushi : ye app kya kah rah he buaji . or hum kaham jayange ? buaji : hum delhi jeyange. waha heme akk gar be he or hamari bahth man kar rahe waha janekeleye. khushi don't do any further argument, she knew her buaji very appsett with this abusment against her . so she also agreed.and she exited also. becase there were buajis relatives and also to see a new city. khushi : hum kab chal rahe he buaji? buaji : hum tho chottee ko phone karke bolathe he ki hum aa rah he. ghar me kai din se koi rah nai thi na patha nai jy hal hoga. chottee tho ache se sambaloonga khushi : aree! buaji ithini badi kam koi se kisinebi detha he kya? buaji : hai re NK kya kare ye ladki ka. wo koi bacha nai he . khushi : par app abi abi chotte buladena. buaji : ahh wo tho unka nick mame he.asal nam "Arnav singh Raizada" he. khushi : "Arnav Singh Raizada"

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Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!! (By Anayaarshi) (Thanked: 36 times)

khushi and buaji reached delhi railway station. there is no one to receive them. buaji : Aree ye kya chottee kaha ki wo ayegi hume lene keliye, par yah kahi dek nai rah he.(there is no one receive us but chottee told me he will come). khushi : ab kya kare buaji?(what will do now?). buaji : ek kam karthe he phone karke ak bar use poochlethe he ki wo ayegi ya nai. tum yaha ruko titalia, hum abi athe . yaha as pass koi booth hoga.( we do on thing,ask him towhether he arrive or not,u wait here i will cheack the telephone booth to call him).(khushi nods). At the same time "Arnav singh raizada" entered in the staton. Arnav was cheacking that, whether his masiji come or not. but after some time his mobile was ringed and he attened the call. madhu : hai re NK hum he bituwa, masiji . hum ye poochne chahthe ki app hume lene kelye aa rahi he kya?. arnav : yeah masiji, infact me yahihum.(i am already here masiji). madhu : achaa , tho app kaha kad rahi ho babuwa ?( then where r u?).hum waha athe he . arnav : teek he masiji me yahi xx platform me hu. madhu : teek NK abi athi he. arnav sit in the side chair, a cool breeze touch his face and turned his face to find the sourse of breeze. the sight tookhis breath , a girl around 19 sit there witha pout ,in a white choodi. he can't take his eyes from her . his trance breake, realised that, actully girl murmur something and tears flow from her eyes. but tears in her eyes bothered him . so he dicided to speak with her. arnanv: hello. girl turned her head to know whom said hello to her. their eyes met . thats it, they were stayed like some time.(rabbbaaavveeeeee.......). after some time she become concious and returned her head. arnav : what the... ( see that she contined her murmur and crying) can't help,but he is smiling looking at her face. he felt it soo cute. he feel somthing new. but he can't understant what is that. he again tried to made a conversation. arnav : hai, if u don't mind can i ask u one thing ? girl looked at him and he continued. arnav : tum ro kyu ho ?( why are u crying) girl : appse mathlab, hu ganthe bi nai app kon he phir me appse kyu bath kare. arnav : what the........ girl : or nai tho kya, hum sirf appse nai pure dilli me hum kisko bi nai gantha.... arnav : ( i think her problem is, as she don't know anyone here), but the seen he saw, he didn't like even a bit .(more tears flow from her eyes, that prik him very badly) arnav : as a human being u can tell what is ur problem. girl : i am new here (he nods), and am come with my buaji from lucknow. when we reach here, no one will come to recevies and buaji goes to cheack him whether he come or not. and said me wait there only. but i feel bored and think to roam the platforms before buaji will come and she sobbed more like a child.(yes she is none other than our kushi kumari guptha) arnav :tho problem yeh he ki buaji ab tak nai aya , hena(she nodds) but don't worry buaji todi der me aa jaygi(for this she nodds negatively.). khushi : wo yaha nai aygi (arnav wated say something but interpretted by khushi) kyoki hume patha nai he ki ye wo platform he jo me pahale thi.( bcs i don't know this is the same platform i stayed before. arnav : what the... u forgotnthe platform . unbelivable ....... (khushi started again murmer. arnav can't take it any more. so he asked). arnav : tum ye kya bulbularaiyo ?( what are u murmuring?). khushi : this is all bcs of that chotteee ..... arnav : whattttt......kon?(who?). khushi : chotteeee ..... ooooppppsss..... "Arnav Singh Raizada". what will happen next , for that stay tune.............................

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Jun 12, 2014

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Arnav : mene kya kiya??????? (what i did).... khushi : are hum apka nai arnav Singh raizada ki bare me kah rah thi... (i am said about asr, not u).... arnav : (gritted his teeth and controlled his anger) par kyu?(but why)... khushi : or nai tho kya, unhi ki waje se me yaha hu(arnav give a what the and unbelivable look) wo samay par agaya tho hum buaji ke sath ghar bi chal gaye honge or hume gumne ka man bi nai **** the(is he arrived at correct time, then now we are in buaji house )she sobbed again... arav amused at her words, she herslef wanted to tour the flatforms and now she is blaming me.and he think; so she the one his masiji said about "khushi kumari guptha".. but the last words come out from his mouth unknowingly.so she heared it that the strange person know her name, but how? khushi : hhh apko hamara nam kaise patha ?(how u know my name) he startled, he thought i really talk it soundly. whether i tell her or not. he is in such a diliema. arnav : actully i am "ar.. buaji : chottee ..... tum yaha ho.. hai re NK hum ab kya kare ?khushi bitiya ko kaise dundem.(how i find kuhi) and now she will reached arnav and hugged him, afterall there was long years she saw her choteee, she named him and loved him like anything.ofr arnav also be like that. buaji : kithana din hogaya hum apne chottee ko dekkkar(she caresed his face and tears brimming her eyes) kuch lamba ho gaya or kuch badal nai he. kase ho babuwa? arnav : i am... fi..ne ma....siji( his voice cracked, he also missing his lovely masiji very much)khar chalee.. then only buaji remember to khushi is missing,she have to find her,..... buaji : nai chotee hume khushi ko dudna hoga . wo athe platform me nai he (arnav was try to say but interpreted by buaji) patha nai kaha he or kisiko jantha bi nai, hame bahoth chintha ho rahi he chottee.. arnav remain sailent and gesture her theside ways, but at first buaji nothing get. he again did, at time she turned her head. buaji can't belive her eyes, there her titalia stand with like ......... yes the moment she saw approach her she felt relaxed but the next second her eyes popped out her sockets that her buaji calls her hansome(in her mind) stranger as chotteee. reality hit her.... so the person sit beside her is non other than " arnav singh raizada".. she don't know what to do or where to hide from him. she compliant him about himself so thats only why he know my name, hee devimayyaa kaha fasa dia appne hume....raksha karna devimayya..... raksha karna(save me god) buaji : arreee bitiya tum yaha ho ? kaha kaha dundlia hume tume... but she can't get any answer from her. arnav also wathches her expressions. he actully understand what bother. so in her sielent he say to buaji how he found her and what heppen to her (not saying the last bit conversations ). and buaji gapsed , she don;t know what to do her sankadevi for her sanak. buaji twist khushi's ear (not harshlly) buaji : ase karnge phirse tu,,, hhhh hum kithna dar gaya the. anjan sahar he, or tume guma ka man kara wo be akele.. agar chottee nai dekha hotha tho kya hoga.(u wanted to tour on alone that to be new place)...... khushi : hume maf karo na buaji; anitha asa nai hoga; hum wada kar the he . kkaan choodiyena ( forgive me and i promise i won't do this again)... arnav get more and more attacted her for every passing minite.he also feel strnge becase this is first time he attracted bya girl. in college many of girls behind him but he not resonsed for any one. but now, that to be he see her first time........................................................................................................................................................... he don't know what happen to him. but we understand that he is in love with that innocent angle......... precape : more arshi moments please vote for me . yours vote is my inspiration. and thanks for the votes and comments and of course thanks... thanku very much for read my story......

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Jun 12, 2014

chapter 7 Khushi in raizada mansion. (By Anayaarshi) (Thanked: 28 times)

so sorry smiley, the reason for my hindi writing is, as i think am back in hindi, i want to improve and learn hindi. so thats only why i write both hindi and english. soooo soooory. if u guys want , don't woory i will defenitily change. but in some time i use hindi also, so please bear my hindi and please try to uderstand...................................................................................................... *********************************************************************************** Arnav led masiji and khushi to the car and said to driver mohan to go sandhivan. but interpreted by masiji and said*** ( her iam using masiji for arnav and buaji for khushi so don't misunderstant)** masiji : hai re Nk what are saying chotte i want to go lakshiminagar, your mosaji's house not in sandhivan.....**** arnav : but why masiji? sadhivan , is not ur house????????? masiji : no, not like that. sandhivan was my house when i am daugher in - law of that house, but after the death of your mosaji all are changed and also no one want me there espcially maji. arnav : don;t even say that buaji. you are still the bahu of raizada parivaar, whether mosaji live or not..... masi : ok ok . but please we are stayed in lakshiminagar only, if u want we will stay there only 2 or 3 days , not much. please chotteee. khushi will feel in differnce, she is not comfortable with unknown people, and i wonder how will she say her problem to u in station that to be with a boy........... ************ here khushi hell embarrassed with the whole thing, and now the comment of buaji and upon that the glances get by him time to time, ( but her heart said to her: u feel his glances bcs u also try to steal glances to him),........... and in between speaking to buaji he passes a smile her and she also give a faint smile.........************************************************************************** the car entered the main gate , same time buaji eyes watered up to think about the past......... khushi wondered to see the house(not much big one like the show) . she in her life not entered this type of luxurious houses. arnav opened the door for them as they entered in the house.................... ********************************************************************************* what will store in the future of both khushi and arnav, for that stay tuneddddd..................................

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Jun 13, 2014

Epiosode - 8 buaji decided to go to her house with khushi. (By Anayaarshi) (Thanked: 22 times)

Three of them entered mansion, then a house keeper(hari prakash) come and take their luggages. arnav instructed him to luggage put in guest room. as they entered hall they recevies two ladies and little cute girl according to khushi. ................................................................................................................... ********************************************************************************** mallika: madhu, how are u?( they hugged each other and shedded tears).............................................. madhu: bilkul teek he nanakishor . or app log(coming out from the hug)................................................ mallika : we are also fine. and she is khushi ? buaji : hmmm. ajali bitiya , badi ho gayi tu... is that ur child(looking the little one)................................... anjali: ha, masiji , she is my child. we are very happy to seeing u here. since long did't get a chance to see u. or khushiji how are u ? how is the journy?................................................................................ khushi don't know who is she, but seeing anjali's caring nature she wanted to reply her but inter preted by some ones sound. all are turned their heads . seeing the person buaji went and bent to take her blessings but the old lady kept mummm. buaji feel hurt, but she don't mind as she expected this only..... buaji : how are u maji? maji : i am fine. what about u, u want to enjoy ur life right, that's only why u go from here 6 years back, then what happen now . all ur enjoyment has finish to come back here once again................................ buaji felt very bad , she thougt, her sasuma didn't change even abit. all are gathered there felt also bad,but kept mumm. no one has the courage to reply her, but expect one; yes non other than our arnav...arnav wanted to say somthing but anjali held his hand and squeeeled it as keep quite.................. buaji : maji what... are u.......sa....saying,,,,( her voice cracked ).......................................................... maji : u don't know about anything, then i will remind u as 6 years back u want marry and life ur settle that to be being a widow,have any one think like that, noooo u r only one think like that......................... buaji shedded more tears , arnav can't take it. so he raised his voice and asked hisdadi....................... arnav: dadi what are u saying? how could ask masiji like that questions? u wanted to hurt again for no reson.. before 6 years also u did that only, belive someones sonud and through buaji in this his house and ur kind information she not statyed here , only 2 or 3,,,,, it interpreted by buaji........................... buaji : nai chotte we are going in some time.just wanted to see u all, where is remaining ones............. arnav : masiji, u said me that u stayed threre.........(again interpreted masiji)...................................... masiji : ha babuwa. but now i think we have to move on AFAP bcs there are so many works are remaing,,,,,,,,............... arnav grt to know that his masiji don't want to sty there anymore so he don't say anything after that........................................................................................................ masiji : baki sab kaha he ? where is arjun bai and kalindi babhi and mallikka babhi where is vikram bai?? mallikka : arjun bai and vikram goes to work and about kalindi ( made a face) i don't know where is she. (introduction of the members will give on the progress of the story).................................................. ********************************************************************************* in all of these an innocent soul is trembled like anything, yes khushi. she can't get the fact that her sweet buaji get abused very badly that to from her on mother in low. she was very exited to be there, but no she is no more exitment. he want to console her buaji and hugged her but that not happen...... maji : i am going to do puja .. as she turned and saw a girl beside her( angry ) chotteee, she also angry with him for questioned her. she didn't like like khushi in her first sight(khushi's beauty remaid maji some past) so she turned to buaji and asked ......................................................................... maji : she is the daughter of shashi.....( buaji nodds) subadra(maji) murmer like don't the now when this girl behind a rich person , like her ammma,( but three persons heared it as they where near to her; buaji, khushi and ...............ofcourse our arnav who boiled his blead with anger ( now also he don't know why) but he feel very bad for khushi and also two tiny drops felled from her eyes.............. ****************************************************************************************************************************************************************** waiting for the next update and please,please vote for meeeeee and also prss the thank butten........... and thanku very much for all who read my story and the lovely comments . after the read pllleeeaaasssseeee also comment my story...... ............................................................................. especially thanku for sneha 1, sa- arshi, arshiipkknd,abulu123,blackshimmer 19, rashvan, arshi mad, lucky,vicky,anamehreen,smiley,sravsluarshi,preethi sivkumar,,,,,, and so on...... please fpr give me if i forgot to remain any one.....................

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Jun 17, 2014

Tum mujse pyar karthi ho na!!!!Raizad's intrduction (By Anayaarshi) (Thanked: 25 times)

sorry friends i am stuck with my personal problems, and also am not able to give regular updates because my exam will start on june 20. so sorry friends.**************************************** ************************************************************************************** All are become sad becase of dadi's behaviour especially khushi, she is very depressed. anjali wanted to changed the mood of all, so she said all to come for lunch, and all gathered dining hall........................ mallikka : madhu, you know her right . she is like that only. we can't change her so don't get upset........ madhu : yaaa... i know her,,,, i think she will change, but not. khushi u ok na.(khushi nodds)............... anju : sorry khushiji for our dadi's words. she always like this .. so please forget it, we are very sorry..... khushi : no , no anjiliji, i am ok. i am just afraid , that's it . ............................................................. (all are having their lunch with little chitchat, in all of these arnav doing his work properly,glancing khushi , and khushi also well known about this. aranav didn't like this khushi, he wanted a blaber khushi) anjili : ofooo , i just forgot to introduce ourselves to khushiji. she don't know about us, right.................. mallikka : haaa that's so right anjili. khushi beta dadi is head of this house, her three children are vikram, arjun and sekhar. i am the eldest bahu of this house, vikram's wife. and anjli is my daughter , her husband syam manohar jha, he is a criminal lawyer . this cute pie is their lovable daughter ruhaana , we call her ruhi. arnav is arjun's son he is doing his MBA in delhi univercity. and about sekhar u know..... (buaji's eye welled up at this, how she wanted her husband is there....... and also her babhi saraswathi) khushi : where is arnaviji's mot............ she can't complete her words at that time a girl aronud17 sreammed and hugged madu tightly........................................................................................... girl : masijiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii............................................................................................................... ************************************************************************************** i know this is a very short update and very boreing but i promise there after try to arshi moments and also will try to give another part very soon . and please click the thank buttun............................

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