OS : LOVE DOES NOT NEED WORDS!!

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Jul 30, 2013

LOVE DOES NOT NEED WORDS!! (By Starshinelight) (Thanked: 115 times)

HEY GUYS!!!

this is my first attempt at an OS, the idea of on OS intrigued me on how to put all the emotions in a compacted form and still do justice to them. hope i have succeded in doing that, do tell me.


HERE IT IS :

The Raizadas and the Guptas had been friends from time immemorial, they always shared a great understanding, be it between the men of the house from where it began, or the women or even the children, there was a sense of belonging which could be felt among them. 

Among them were 4 children,

 the 2 Raizada brothers, Arnav and Aakash and 

the 2 Gupta sisters Khushi and payal.

Khushi and Aakash were best of friends, pranking and playing all the time where as Payal and Arnav were the reserved reading-a-book-in-the-corner sort of people, and this is what attracted the opposites to eachother.

Over the years Aakash and Payal fell for eachother and declared their love infront of their families only to find them ecstatic and all hula ho over their wedding. Arnav and Khushi being the elder ones were laden with responsibilities and were still aloof. 

Khushi working hard in the hospital set up by the Gupta’s and Arnav working to take AR Designs to new heights.

As the talks of marriage began Arnav and khushi being elder were considered first and for the happiness of their siblings they conceded to marry each other. It was not that they were enemies or stuff of that sort but they always felt akward and at loss of worlds in front of each other, call it attraction or anything else but they  in their 25 years together had never had a conversation which included anything apart from the plesantaries and the weather discussion.

But now they were married on the same day as Payal and Aakash, now communication was necessary.

Arnav had always been a little jealous (tiny miny) of Aakash on how well he could bond with khushi which he himself could not even communicate. On khushi’s side, she thought Arnav to be a very deep, thoughtful and carful kind of guy and she hesitated to approach him.

But as days started passing, they became comfortable, not to the level which Khushi and Aakash shared but atleast the akwardness was gone. Arnav at times was irritated by this fact that khushi spent more time with the rest of the family but then when she was with him he hardly said anything to start a conversation and she would silently perform her duties with utmost sincerity and leave.

But yes they were falling for eachother, they started noticing the small hidden qualities of their partners which was earlier not visible like Arnav noticed how khushi mingled with everyone of each age at the hospital, had them at ease in a sec, how she took care of all his needs without him reminding her of it, how she knew his each habit, his routine and how she balanced work, house and life, how she looked charming when she faked anger, how her actions had started effecting him.

Khushi also noticed how Arnav was soo organized, so settled and down to earth, on the outside a hard shell to fight the world but he took care of every small need of his family, how he anonymously brought them joy and happiness, how he helped everyone while still maintaining his image, how he took care of her but never showed it, how he was a true gentleman to never cross the line without permission, how he never judged her, and how he lost his cool soo often but tried to refrain from unleashing it on her.

These small small discoveries made them closer to eachother, now the stage of akwardness had passed only shyness remained, who takes the first step??

 

10 months had passed , though the status of their relationship had changed in their minds but it was not visible on their faces.

Now-a-days khushi was on her yearly leave and Arnav was working nights to win the most prestigious foreign project to establish a foot in the international market.

Khushi saw how he was so tried after overworking himself that sometimes he dosed of on the dining chair while she had gone to get his dinner, then she had to drag him to bed late at night and he would cutely pull her to himself , encircle her in his arms and sleep like a child.

She understood his pressure and gave in to his small unsaid requests of providing comfort though she would leave early morning before he woke up to avoid embarrassing situations.

This indeed helped Arnav as he felt fresh in the morning to take on the world, strangely unaware of the saviour but determined to fined out he came home late one night and as usual dosed (acting to dose off) off on the chair, he realized how much his wife was supporting him, she fed him food, gave him his medicines and took him to bed and lay there beside him and automatically Arnav took her in his arms and they slept hugging each other, now Arnav knew the reason of  his success in office each day, his wife was really a flower to freshen him up.

Now Arnav had decided that he would tell his feeling to her as he had got a glimpse of her emotions last night but God had some other plans, he could not wait anymore for Arnav to devise plans. That day turned out to be crucial in the office as the foreign clients dropped by unexpected and the presentation was to be done today but then Arnav had worked soo hard for this that he could not let it slip by soo he worked hard and quick and at 1 in the night the deal was signed and Arnav joy knew no limit, he declared a holiday for the next day and rushed home to see his beautiful wife waiting for him at the table. He took quick leaps and pulled her up from the chair and into his arms hugging her with all the love that he had. Khushi got up confused, later replaced by shock to see Arnav so expressive when he lifted her up twirled her in the air and started thanking her again and again.

Khushi : thank you kis liye? (why thankyou?) 

Arnav : thank you for coming in my life khushi ,for making it beautiful, for making me fall in love with you.

Khushi : love, me?????

Arnav : yes, I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!!!! And he again pulled her in a bone crushing hug and a contented Khushi hugged him back with equal intensity.

Khushi : I love you too dammit!! She said a little shy.

Arnav : I know.

Khushi: huh!!

Arnav : I know u love me or why would you do what you have been doing for me for the past 1 month. I never knew why I felt so lively and energized each morning but then yesterday I got to know that when my love is showering her love at me all night how could I not feel knew. Just your hug while sleeping, your presence this close to me made me relax a great deal and then I knew that you loved me too!!

Khushi: loved me too!!! What do u mean I was always soo scared that u married me for Aakash that u will never be able to see me as your wife!!! Could you not give me some hints so that I could relax!! Huh!! And about yesterday I knew something was wrong!! You were so easily giving in to everthing, the food , the medicine otherwise I had to push each morsel down your throat!! Khushi said turning her back to him.

Arnav hugging her from the back said : would it then have been a story worth telling to our kinds if everything had been so casual and usual, tell me???

Khushi immediately turned a shade of red and Arnav could not stop himself from kissing her so when he kissed her cheeks khushi’s eyes popped out of their sockets and she quickly rushed in to the kitchen to get the dinner.

The dinner was a quiet affair but when Arnav’s desperation reached it’s peak , he picked khushi up and took her to their room to actually start their married life………..

Life took a u-turn and they loved each other like never before, their love grew by the day and gave them two bundles of joy (twins) after a year of their declaration of love. What more could someone want from God when he gave everything that one could ever wish for.........

THE END

so, this is it, pleaseeeeeeee do tell me how it was. if you liked it then do comment or atleast press the thank you button yaar, you comments, suggestions and critism is always welcome, i will only help me improve so do leave a feed back.

THANK YOU.

ENJOY LIFE.



Aug 1, 2013

THANK YOU........ (By Starshinelight) (Thanked: 24 times)

THANK YOU TOO ALL OF YOU FOR SUCH A FANTASTIC RESPONSE, IT HAS REALLY ENCOURAGED ME TO WRITE MORE.NEVER THOUGHT THAT I WILL GET SUCH A RESPONSE!!! THANKS TO ALL THE SILENT READERS AND A SPECIAL THANKS TO:

Mirna : thank you soooooooooo much dear for your support and encouragement, it means a lot...

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A BIG BIG BIG THANKS TO ALL OF YOU, FOR ALL MY SPECIAL READERS I WILL BE UPDATING A NEW OS LATER AT NIGHT, JUST FINISHING TOUCHES REMAINING, LET'S SEE HOW YOU FIND IT........

THANKS..

ENJOY LIFE...

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