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Mar 2, 2017

Part 8 It's Party time (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 60 times)

At Prom

Realising what she was indicating 

Arnav: Oh ...kay so what was the plan?

Aman: Arnav actually it was not what we planned, in fact, and it wasn't this horrible. (Sighing) Anyway, we wanted Pawan out by hook or crook and we used it as the situation turned too good

Kiran: Yeah and in simple words, he got the reply in his own medicine. (Grinning) Actually, we went behind Pawan and spilled the juice on his dress. We thought he will go out to clean up. But that creep was rooted to his spot seeing beautiful girls in the way

Aman: So Kiddu used it against him

Arnav, Rahul and especially Nikhil instantly guessed what happened but others were clueless.

Sruthy: Please enlighten us too, Ms. Prankster

Kiran: Oho ... it was simple Sru. (Turning to Naina) Ninu you know Kiya's and Lav's classmate that over sweet Amrita Seghal

Naina: You mean that over sanskari?

Kiran: Yeah, that one. I was waiting for a situation to embarrass her as she was hell-bent on hitting on Arnie and spoiling my dear couple 'ArShi' ... so you can say the situation was like killing two birds in the single shot. Okay ... so she was standing opposite to where we were sitting. I just waved her a hi and she as usual done her Namaskar. Pawan the great thought it was directed towards him and while she gestured for me to come and meet her family he thought she called him. Luckily for us, he followed her and her bodyguard brothers beat him to hell for that.

Aman: Yeah the earlier plan was to use his weakness, but we can't trust him with girls. So we almost stopped that. But I guess his time is too bad and yeah we couldn't think of a much better scene, then

Naina: That was for Pawan, what about Akash?

Aman: She told our London manager to inform Akash about Pawan. It was obvious Akash will give up the function for his sweet Salesahab

Rahul: He is just 'Sala' no need for the addition 'Sahab'

Aman: Whatever .... and as Amrita is considered she embarrassed her and her brothers saying you mistook a poor soul when Akash came there

Rahul: (Chuckling) Kiddu you are awesome yaar! From where do you get these plans?

Khushi: From where else, look at your right, yes your buddy itself the 'ASR'

Kiran: Haw meanie ... (Pouting) you gave that credit too to Arnie. It was my brain

All chuckled hearing her.

Manav: Yes Kiya, don't underestimate the power of Kiddu, right princess?

Kiran: Uncle too.

Rahul: Okay ...okay, no more teasing Kiddu (Side hugging her) By the way tell us Kiddu who is your date for tonight?

Kiran: (Huffing) You know what Rahu? You only have the name of my SRK but not his brain

Rahul: What the

Arnav: Hey that's my line dude

Kiran: Yeah don't steal officer. Isn't it obvious it will be my BF?

Naina: Kiddu you have a BF?

Kiran: Like hubby like wifey. Oho Ninu ... isn't it obvious? Of course the most handsome, suave Dr.Manav Singh Raizada. Can't you see we are wearing the matching dress?

Manav: (Chuckling) yeah ... yeah, who else can be her date? Chal badmash (Come crazy) and guys we can have a blast on the dance stage. What say?

All together: YES

All moved to dance stage. All ladies were in beautiful gowns and their Men with matching suits.


(Manav and Kiran)

(Nikhil and Lavanya)

(Aman and Sruthy)

(Rahul and Naina)

And finally

(Arnav and Khushi)

The night was still young and all were enjoying the prom night. After the dance, all settled with beer while Manav and Kiran opted for juice. Suddenly a bunch of reporters came towards them.

Reporter1: ASR and Rahul sir could you give us few minutes.

Rahul: Only if you guys will not go overboard, okay ... so shoot

Reporter2: (Who have a secret crush on ASR) sir actually it was shocking for us that ASR is married. (Turning to Arnav) You know ... you broke so many hearts. Tell us ASR why you got married so suddenly?

Arnav: Excuse me. Suddenly? It has been three years

Reporter1: Sorry sir, actually we have never met Ma'am before and have no idea about your marriage

Arnav: That was because it was a private affair

Reporter2: But sir why she was not seen before and even the fact that you are married is not known to the world. Is your family aware?

Arnav: Miss ... I think you didn't hear me I said it was a private affair ... but yeah of course with my family's awareness

Manav: (Clearing his throat) by the way don't you think I am his family

Reporter1: Sorry sir it was not to offend you. So Dr: Raizada what do you have to talk about the award and your DIL being the topper

Manav: I felt overwhelmed to receive it from the place I worked for long and ye I am so proud of both my daughters for their achievements and (Chuckling) I hope they will be soon joining the hospital

Lavanya: Of course we will be joining

Reporter2: So sir ... what was the reason for accepting to organize this event especially?

Arnav raised his eyebrow and a deadly stare and knowing him Rahul took the matter to his hands

Rahul: You know like we said in the stage it was overwhelming to organize the party in our own college. And as you know Dr: Raizada is my godfather and being Arnav's dad it was our decision to organize this honoring here. Moreover, it was our special treat to the Raizada ladies.

Reporter1: So Ms. And Mrs. Raizada, what you have to talk about being topper?

Khushi: (Smiling politely) as I said earlier obviously it is too overwhelming and a perfect dreams come true moment for me

Lavanya: Yeah, indeed it is

Arnav: And I think that is enough for now

Reporter: Yes sir, but can we take a group pic?

Arnav was about to deny seeing their attitude but Rahul pressed his hands stopping him and all posed for the photos.

At Paradise

Akash: (On-call) yes Payalji, Sale sahib is sleeping now. I don't know what that people thought about him. I too got frightened to see them and later I explained to them that he is innocent. Don't worry ah yes, he is resting now and tell Sasuma that we are coming back tomorrow itself. Okay now please give the phone to Anju.

Anjali: Bhaiyya when are you guys coming? Pawan Bhai can travel, right? Did Lavanya pack everything?

Akash: No Anju Chachu said she will come with them as she has some works in the university. Don't worry they all will come soon. I and Salesahab will reach there by tomorrow evening.

Anjali: Oh! Papa is there. And Bhaiyya please give the phone to Arnav, he hasn't called me from the time he left.

Akash: Anju ... actually, they have a party tonight. Arnav, Chachu, and Lavanya all are there. And you know what Chachu got an award there and Arnav and Rahul were the sponsors.

Anjali: Really? Papa didn't tell me

Akash: Maybe he forgot

Anjali: Hmm ... anyway, I have to congratulate Papa. And oh, Rahul too is there and Party? Does Lavanya know what is the time now? There must be midnight now. Right?

Akash: Yeah. I tried to talk to her but Chachu was insisting ... And Anju I have found some truths, will tell while I reach and now let me sleep. The flight is in morning and Arnav told he will drop me. Ok then will call when boarding. Tell everyone that Lavanya will come with Chachu.

Anjali: Ok good night Bhaiyya

Akash: Good night Anju

Akash and Pawan were fast asleep while all came back. As Arnav's home was there Aman and Rahul along with their Partners were staying there. All were tired and Arnav had to carry Kiran to her room since she was asleep. Khushi too was very much tired so Arnav opted to sleep soon after changing rather than their usual 'Men's cheers Chat' as he has to drop Akash tomorrow and all agreed with him as they too were hell tired.

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Mar 5, 2017

Part 9 Little bickerings and remote dreams (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 57 times)

At Paradise

Arnav just returned after dropping Akash and Pawan on the airport. As usual, a fight was going on between Khushi and Kiran when he walked in. Khushi was running behind Kiran and seeing him both stopped and panting

Arnav: What a way to start a morning. (Shaking his head) you guys will never grow up

Khushi: It is not my fault okay. She again poured water on me and disturbed my sleep

Kiran: (Smirking) actually that was my intention too

Arnav: Good Kiddu ... and Kiya, no fault of yours, like seriously. Don't you think it is good to jog in the morning to be fit otherwise people will mock me saying I married a fatty, right?

Kiran: Exactly Fatty.

Saying this Kiran and Arnav hi-fived each other which irked Khushi and she stormed away into kitchen huffing and taunting the duo. Manav who reached the foot of stairs shook his head seeing them. Seeing Manav Kiran headed towards the door and Manav followed her. But realizing that Arnav isn't following them Kiran turned around and asked

Kiran: Arnie, aren't you coming for the jog? We are already late

Manav: (Smirking) GF, I think your Arnie have to pacify his wifey, right Arnav? (Winking at Arnav) (Turning to Kiran) so come let us go

Arnav: (Making a puppy face) yeah Kiddu a tough job ahead, so you guys go. Bye Dad, Bye Kiddu

Manav: Bye

Kiran: Bye Arnie

Kiran and Manav went out and Arnav slowly walked into the kitchen shaking his head remembering their silly fight.

In the Kitchen

Khushi was muttering to the coffee machine about her stupid husband. He came behind her and hugged her from the back and placed his head on her shoulder. She tried to come out from his embrace but he held her tighter

Arnav: Angry?

Khushi: Why should I be? And why are you wasting time here? Go and marry some size zero models who will follow your fitness mantra and all, then you can get rid of this fatty

Arnav: Sweetheart, you know I was kidding. I just played with Kiddu

Khushi: (Pouting) you always do that, teasing me teaming with her

Arnav: (Smirking) Oh my ... don't tell me you are jealous

Khushi: (Elbowing him) go don't talk to me

Arnav: Okay sorry my fault, I will never call you as fatty again

She was about to smile but he ran away saying

Arnav: FOR NOW

Khushi: YOU...

Khushi threw something on which she could land her hands but he caught it and placed it on the slab grinning which made her madder and repeated it again and again until he said

Arnav: Okay ... okay now stop, I am tired

Khushi: Really? I thought ASR had better stamina

Arnav: (Sighing dramatically) Oh I had ...I really had, baby, but you know what? (Smiling smugly) As my wife uses all of my stamina that now I get tired easily

Khushi: Eww ... nowadays you talk too much dirty Arnav (Seeing him coming closer) and I think it will be better if the great ASR move out from here and let me do my work

Arnav: But ... (With a puppy face) yeah, I didn't get my coffee

Khushi: You go to the living room, I will bring it there. (Mumbling) what does he think of himself? Huh ... do everything and then make a puppy face and I will agree. Stupid angry bird

Arnav: (Over his shoulder) hey, I heard that

Khushi: Good for you. (Loudly) by the way where are your friends?

Arnav: They would have been busy at night you see (Winked at her) unlike poor me

Khushi: (Shaking her head) shameless man, you will never change. Okay now go I will bring your coffee

She said as she very well knows he will continue this if he stayed there not allowing her to do her work

Arnav: (Grinning) as you say fatty

Khushi: Arrrnav...

Arnav walked to hall chuckling to himself and saw Rahul sitting there reading the newspaper.

Arnav: (Loudly) Kiya make it two. (To Rahul)Hey good morning buddy

Rahul: Yeah morning buddy, so?

Arnav: What?

Rahul: (Raising his eyebrow) you skipped the jog?

Arnav just said 'Biwi' (Wife) and Rahul nodded understandingly before they both fell into fits of laughter.

Rahul: By the way, where are Nikhil and Aman? Gone for the jog?

Arnav: No not up yet, (Seeing his frown) never mind its the problem during engagement phase. Once married they will be up early like us

Rahul: So true

Both again shared a laugh and Khushi who came with their coffee hit Arnav on his shoulders. He took the coffee and smiled sheepishly at her. Rahul smiled at the duo shaking his head and sipped his coffee

Rahul: So buddy what's the plan? I mean ... we have two days time

Arnav: Hmm ... Kiddu has exams so will be at her friends' and Dad is also busy. So let us go somewhere where we can enjoy as couples

Nikhil: Wow, good news in the morning. I am in bro

Aman: You stole my words Nikhil

Arnav: I know you guys will say that only. Would be joru ka gulams (Slaves of wives)

Aman: (To others) Look who is speaking

For which Arnav scoffed at him and Aman made a face at him. Rahul said ending their cold war

Rahul: So it is fixed then

And all others nodded agreeing with him.

After Kiran left for her friend's home and Manav for the hospital. The gang set for a journey to enjoy themselves with their friends and partners.


Akash and Pawan reached sometime before and they were surrounded by questions about Pawan's health and expressing their disappointment as Lavanya had not come back. Pawan and Mathumathy went to their home and after that when everybody settled in the living room

Anjali: (Remembering something) Bhaiyya, you were saying that you found out something, right?

Akash: Oh that,  I met Kiddu I mean the person who called Arnav on that day

Payal: Oh who is he?

Akash: It is she, not he. And, (Turning to Anjali) Anju do you know a Kabir who was Chachu's friend?

Before Anjali could answer

Chachu: Are you by any chance talking about Kabir Khurana?

Akash: Yes Papa. You know him?

Chachu: Yes, you guys may not remember as you two were kids but yeah he was Manav's best friend

Dadi: Yeah they both studied together since childhood and he was the influence behind Manav's bold decision to marry Arpita bahu without his family's consent. And after marriage when your Dadaji refused to accept the marriage they together moved to London.  (To Anjali) Anju do you remember your mother's friend Gayathri? She was Kabir's wife and another culprit behind their love marriage

Anjali: No I can't recollect. Bhaiyya, so who is this Kiddu?

Akash: Oh yeah, I was coming into that. She is Kabirji's daughter Kiran, who is in the last year of her school

Dadi: But his daughter's name was not that. As far as I remember it was something like Khushboo, Kushali or something. Manav and Bahu were very fond of her, she was hmm ... I think a couple of years younger than Arnav and would have been even married by now.

Akash: It's Khushi Dadi. That is his elder daughter and Kiran is her younger sister. But I don't think she is married

Chachi: What do you mean by that? The girl will be around 28 years now ... when is she planning to marry? (Shaking her head) Girls these days. Even Lavanya has exceeded the age for marriage, I am tolerating her stupid plans to study only because of Devarji ... (Sarcastically) so what is she doing now that she didn't get time to even marry?

Akash: Actually she is in Lavanya's class and from their talks, I guess Khushiji is her friend and they are living in the same house

Payal: Lavanya Nanad's class? But she is only 25 and as per Dadi, this Khushiji might be 28, right? Also living in the same house along with Devarji ... oh God what and all will happen when somebody comes to know about it?

Akash: I don't know about all that Payalji ... hmm but I think that is all common there. Also, I think Khushiji is Arnav's friend too and Anju ... I guess the phone call Arnav received that day was from Khushiji's number, I mean he was calling her Kiya

Chachu: What? He is calling people nicknames and all! He usually doesn't do that with anyone other than Lavanya, not even with his family. But what I can't believe is Manav know all this and even then approved all this instead of correcting Arnav

Akash: I think yes Chachu was actually not having any problem. In fact, it seemed he too was pretty close to them

Anjali: (Sighing) I am not surprised as he never speaks anything against Arnav. I just hope people will not start making stories that will affect our reputation in the society. (Shaking her head) this boy and his modern culture

Shyam: Yeah then it will jeopardize his marriage with Sheetal

Dadi: Damadji, don't think too much. It's in his Kundli (Horoscope) that he will marry as per his parent's choice, so don't worry about that. And Sheetal Bitiya you don't worry when Manav come back this time I will speak with him

Sheetal blushingly nodded her head and everyone smiled at her. But as for Akash, he doesn't know why but he can feel that it will not be that easy as they think. He hoped Arnav will not hurt their feelings.

After two more parts shocking surprises are there for the family.

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Mar 8, 2017

Part 10 Conversations and conversations (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 66 times)

After a couple of days

At Paradise

Khushi was standing in the balcony keeping her hands on railings sipping her coffee looking to the front garden absentmindedly. That's how Arnav who came back from office found her. He was actually not in a good mood but seeing her he quickly masked it and quietly placed his laptop bag on the table and did the thing that enhances his mood. That is gathered her in his arms and Khushi who was in deep thought was startled at first but then knowing the similar touch relaxed in his arms.

Khushi: You are early today

Arnav: (Nuzzling her neck) hmm ... actually, a little birdie told me that my sweetheart is alone at home and I thought I would give her a company ... by the way what were you thinking so deeply?

Khushi: About our trip only ... it was wonderful, right? I mean ... I like it when our whole gang is together as it is only sometimes I can think there are people who care about me and Kiddu other than you guys ... and now they all returned back

Arnav: (Concerned) hey ... (Slowly turning her around) where are you going with these thoughts? (Cupping her cheeks)Baby ... your Chachu was bad it doesn't mean you guys are bad or nobody will like you. You please shut that thought

Khushi: Hm ... okay leave all that ... and Arnav what do you think your family's reaction will be seeing me? (Seeing his raised eyebrow) I mean your family in India. Will they accept me?

Arnav: (Shrugging) I don't know ... shocked maybe ... but you please don't start with 'your family' and ... to think in that way ... I thought we were over with that topic

Khushi: I know my angry bird (Turning around) I am not going in that line ... I mean I was just asking to know about them

Arnav: Oh ...kay, if you say so and about them ... there is nothing to be explained in detail ... in short too much conservative so you can guess their reaction. Anyway leave these unnecessary thoughts. And hey you are having coffee without me ...

Khushi: Oh hello ... till now you kept me engaged in talks and now blaming me huh! Anyway move I will bring now ...

Arnav: (Smirking) who told you I need an extra cup. (Taking her cup) this will do

Khushi: But you ...

Arnav: I will be fine. (Sipping the coffee) by the way, where is my prankster? Today too at friends'?

Khushi: Yeah ... but will come now. Dad called, he told me that he will pick her up while coming back

Arnav: (Frowning) don't you think she is ignoring me when Dad is around?

Khushi: (Chuckling) Arnav... don't tell me you are jealous of Dad? (In a baby voice) Ohh ... so Arnie is missing his partner in crime? (Pulling his cheeks) you are soooo cute Arnav

Arnav: Hey, men are termed as handsome not ...

Before he could complete they heard a calling bell. Khushi rushed down to welcome them and Arnav went to freshen up.

Kiran wanted to have a milkshake and as Lucy had gone to market Khushi was preparing that for her while she was sitting on the kitchen slab swinging her legs.

Kiran: Kiya ... did all of them leave?

Khushi: Yeah ... and everybody told me to inform you since they couldn't call you as you had class at that time. By the way, you tell me how were your studies ... covered everything?

Kiran: Not exactly. Actually, I am stuck with some problems, even Ana too don't know that. So I thought that my sweet sis will help me (Putting a puppy face)

Khushi: Hey no don't go there ... you know I am not good with Mathematics as Arnav is. You ask him he will be having some shortcuts and all

Kiran: Ok and sis you know what ? Ana's mom told me she saw us on news and to say congratulations to you

Khushi: Oh so sweet of her ... tell my thanks next time

Kiran: Hmm

Khushi prepared the drink and gave her the glass but she was in deep thought.

Khushi: (Clicking a finger in front of her) Hey now what happened?

Kiran: Huh! Sis ... I was thinking that whether this news will be in India too if so the 'devil Raizadas' will see us right?

Khushi: Kiddu! Don't call them names like Arnav does, it's bad manners ... and baby it was an American channel I don't think that will be available in India

Kiran: Oh...kay ... now let me go I have to complete one more chapter before asking my doubts to

Arnie since you know your husband is worse than my teacher, will ask question after questions so I have to be prepared. Huh... he is too much so is the exams. (Sighing) anyway I am glad that now only two exams are left

Khushi chuckled at her and started with her dinner preparations.

Arnav was sitting in the poolside staring at the laptop. Manav who was passing by saw that and came and sat before him which Arnav didn't sense at all.

Manav: What is eating you Arnav?

Arnav: (Startled) Dad? When did you come? (Faking a smile)

Manav: when you were literally burning the screen with your eyes. So ... what's the problem?

Arnav: (Sighing) Dad the deal I told you last month it has to be completed this week. Aman and Sruthy are handling it but my absence will burden them more. But how can I go now? I mean ... I am afraid about Kiya

Manav: Arnav, why are you worrying unnecessarily, Nikhil told me it was due to improper meals and now I being here will make sure she didn't skip any meal

Arnav: (Sadly) Dad ... it is not about meals or tiredness

Manav: Attacks again?

Arnav: Yeah and the problem is me

Manav: Come again

Arnav: (Sighed) Dad last time when she passed out Mary Auntie was waiting for me and told Kiya is again on attacks as now she is afraid to lose me. Since she doesn't want to afraid others she hadn't said this and told me directly. I talked to Kiya but ... but I think she is not accepting it wholeheartedly

Manav: But suddenly what happened?

Arnav: Actually she attended Lavanya's phone and Chachi without even checking the person was explaining her illusions about my marriage with Sheetal and she couldn't take the news I guess

Manav: But, she knows you love her and you guys are married then what is there to be insecure?

Arnav: It is about Khushi we are talking about. She ... she said she can't allow me to get separated from my family. (Taking a deep breath) How ironic Dad, still she is on 'your family', then what is she? How will I make her understand? I don't know. (Sighing) above that, I have to be in India but it will take one more week for Kiddu's exams to be over. (Looking hopefully at him) what will I do Dad?

He started pacing and Manav too stood up

Manav: Arnav ... it is not me who should take a decision, It has to be yours but all I can say is, doesn't do anything by which you have to regret. I mean if she is scared to lose you then you can never remove her fear by always being at her side. And I will say being together is always not about physically being present but the feeling that you are always with her even if you are not near ... that will make her much strong. In simple words ... you go to Delhi Arnav but be with her always. (Patting his shoulder) Don't worry we will deal with this together

Arnav know as always Manav will guide him. That was how it always was when he is totally confused it is his Dad who always shown him a path out of the mess after mom. Feeling overwhelmed he hugged Manav. Manav too hugged him affectionately seeing the boy under the mask of ASR

Manav: Everything will be fine Arnie

Arnav smiled sadly hearing that name since Dad calls him like Mom called when they both terribly misses mom or when he has to do the part of his Mom too.

At night

Arnav was sitting on the bed resting his head on the headboard all lost. Khushi came from the bathroom after the shower and joined him on the bed. But he was in such a deep thought that he didn't sense her

Khushi: Hey where are you lost?

Arnav: Huh! ... Khushi ... actually, I have something to talk to you. But you should promise me that you will not shriek out and will listen to me carefully

Khushi: What is it Arnav? You are scaring me

Arnav: (Hugging her shoulders) Hey ... hey, calm down. Kiya you know the deal I am working for last two months has to be finished this week. (Sighing) I mean ... when I got a call from Kiddu saying you are admitted I came here leaving everything. I am not saying this because I regret my decision ... but I, Aman and Sruthy being away for four days increased the stress and I ... I don't think they can handle all that alone

Khushi: Then why are you not helping them I mean they will be working day and night and ...

Arnav: I know, but for that, I have to be in Delhi

Khushi suddenly turned all silent and looked at Arnav pale and lost. He instantly hugged her and rubbed her back

Arnav: Khushi ... baby, listen to me carefully ... you will never ever lose me, first of all, take that thought away from you. I am not willing to leave you guys here and go, but (Sighing) what to do circumstances are not in my favor. If it was only my problem I wouldn't have thought twice before canceling the deal, but this is the work of thousand people and if I ca ...

Before he could complete the sentence Khushi broke the hug and placed her palm on his mouth.

Khushi: I understand Arnav ... I ... I know you have your responsibilities you can't always cuddle me and I don't even need that. I mean like to be your partner, not your child and ... and about that day the whole situations turned against me that's why I had ... had attacks. But don't worry I will keep such thoughts away so that you can breathe properly. And yeah you don't think too much we will manage and it is only for a few days I will come to you before you know

Arnav: Now that's like my girl and ... yeah don't take too much tension Dad will be here. Also feel free to call me even in the middle of the night rather than thinking too much with your tiny brain. Anyway I know you will be having more free time since GF-BF will be very busy leaving you alone

He winked at her saying this and they both laughed at that

Khushi: So ... Lav will go with you

Arnav: Hmm ... she said Chachi is insisting but I will talk to her if you want

Khushi: No Arnav, it is better for her to obey them as she will have to go against them in Nikhil's matter

Arnav: Yeah that is right too ... (Sighing dramatically) what to do yaar such a family we got ... and about other things we can sort it all once you guys will come to RM. Dad wanted to talk to Dadi only after you complete studies otherwise I wouldn't have tolerated their pathetic wedding plans. And Khushi ... (Holding her hands) I have a request to you when you come to India don't bend before anything or anyone and behave as KSR otherwise people will dance on your head

Khushi: As you say, hubby. So when you have to go?

Arnav: Tomorrow noon

Khushi: WHAT. Stupid man can't you tell all these before and why are you sitting like a statue now ... arrey move I have to pack everything

Arnav: (Chuckled and hugged her) Calm down sweetheart I said noon. We can do it in the morning since I have other plans for now.

And they were again drawn in their own sweet world

Next noon Lavanya and Arnav started towards India and Manav ensured him he will look after everything here. Lavanya was all tearful to leave the place which gave her wonderful five years and also Khushi, Kiran and especially Nikhil. They assured her to soon meet in India.

Let us see what is waiting for the 'devil raizadas'

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Mar 13, 2017

Part 11 'PT', dont try to mess with ASR (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 69 times)



From the time Arnav and Lavanya reached Delhi Lavanya was surrounded with stupid questions about anything and everything as they know they can't get a word from ASR. But they realized it later that they couldn't get much information from Lavanya too.

Lavanya was irritated to hell and was missing her friends terribly. The only relief she had was as Pawan is on bed rest for at least two months they will not start with the topic of marriage. Today Arnav was working late and as she was hell bored she told them she is calling it a night as she is tired.

Next morning

Arnav was walking down the stairs thinking why Khushi hasn't called yet as the normal time got over and he was worried thinking about last time. That's when he heard Chachi taunting Lavanya for waking late and she without listening to anything was loudly singing some irritating songs and eating fruits as today too they made Anju's favorite food. He shook his head at his sister's crazy antics. That's when his phone rang and he sighed and smiled seeing 'Kiya' flashing on it.

Arnav: Hey... good morning wifey

Khushi: (Pouting) not good hubby

Arnav: (Facepalming) oh please don't tell me it's a water fight again

Khushi: No ... today she planned a new drama

Arnav: And what is that

He sat beside Lavanya and mouthed a 'good morning' side hugging her. Others looked puzzled seeing him in a good mood

Khushi: (Sighing) at morning she came to the room to sleep with me saying she wanted to cuddle me. Then she mumbled that she wanted to eat pancakes

Arnav: Whattt ... she and pancakes?

Khushi: Yeah I too thought that but we cannot predict K3's mood so I made blueberry pancake for her hoping she will eat anything healthy even leaving my sleep but you know what the little devil said? That will be my hallucination as that is your favorite and she can't even think of eating that let alone asking for that and top to it she didn't even come to our room. And even Dad supported her saying he woke her up from her room only and then I was like (Pouting) was I really hallucinating?

Arnav started to chuckle loudly hearing Kiran's creative pranks and imagining Khushi's confused face. All looked at him shocked to see him chuckling so freely that he found it even difficult to breathe. After some time he collected himself and said

Arnav: Okay ... (Smirking) but you gotta agree with me it was a novel idea. By the way, you believed it was true (Again chuckled)

Khushi: Ah ... ah, laugh ... laugh I knew you will do that only. After all, she got this type of innovative ideas from you only and ... this is you guys' favorite hobby, to irritate me. (Sighing) it is my fault to even tell you all this and giving you another reason to tease me. And novel idea ... well thanks to Dad otherwise I would have gone mad

Arnav: ****tt ... he spoiled it. Anyway, what is this blueberry one?

Lavanya nudged Arnav and raised her eyebrow asking whom and he mouthed Kiya. Lavanya gestured she too want to talk and he gestured one minute.

Khushi: Yeah ... it's my new found recipe; I will make it for you later. Anyway, leave all that had breakfast ... what is today's special ... and where is Lav?

Arnav: Nothing special, toast as usual and Lavu is here irritating the hell out of me to talk to you

For which Lavanya hit his hands

Khushi: Hey ... don't you dare blame my bestie and now give her the phone

Arnav: Oh...kay ... okay (To Lavanya) here

He gave his phone to Lavanya and Sheetal who was standing behind them to serve Arnavji got sad seeing a beautiful girl's photo on his phone and to see him talking to her very freely. Anjali and Payal too saw the photo and wondered who that is. Akash guessed it may be either Khushi or Kiran and wondered why they are too much important to him. Dadi was observing Arnav seeing his expressions she remembered him saying about some daily complaint last time the 'Kiddu' had called. She wondered is this one of that calls but nevertheless concentrated on Lavanya's words like others.

Lavanya was chatting nineteen to dozen with her bestie and Arnav can guess from Lavanya's double meaning talks what their conversation is about and so a smile was constantly playing on his lips. All were amused to see his smile and wondered how close he is to the caller. After Lavanya finished her call Anjali asked immediately

Anjali: Lavanya who was on the call (Arnav raised his eyebrow smiling inside as he knows Anjali is asking Lavanya as she is afraid to ask him)

Lavanya: My friend

Anjali: And what is her name?

Lavanya was about to answer but Arnav interrupted her as he knows the trio had seen Khushi's photo and just couldn't read the name due to the smaller font during the call from the distance and so is trying to get it.

Arnav: Why? You know all her friends?

All frowned seeing his attitude while Lavanya stifled her laugh. That's when Manav called on Anjali's phone, she attended it and after ending it she said

Anjali: Dadi Papa called and said he will come in few days and some guests are also coming with him

All nodded their head not understanding who that is but Arnav and Lavanya looked at each other and winked. Men then rushed to the office and Arnav reminded Lavanya to visit the orphanage and hospital as per Manav had asked, who was more than ready to oblige, happy to be away from the hell called RM.

After one week


Kiran's exams and prom got over and she was very excited to go to India for the first time and of course to meet her dear Arnie too. But Manav stuck with an urgent surgery and thus he can't leave the place for a few days which upset all. The reason was simple since they know Arnav, they together celebrate everyone's birthday and missing Arnav's birthday was not settling with them as it is will be over before they reach India. Knowing the news Lavanya and Arnav too got very disturbed. This one-week Arnav was very busy and he got only late night chat as the time to spend with Khushi and now as their journey delayed it upset him more.

That night Arnav was, as usual, talking to Khushi on phone sitting on the poolside along signing some papers.

Arnav: Yaar ... I already miss you too much now I will miss you guys more, as you know I have never 'really' celebrated my birthday after without you all

Khushi: Why? The guys may be planning something

Arnav: But I don't want to celebrate without you, so I told Aman not to plan anything

Khushi: Oh ... then he can't plan anything (Smirking) I mean he will be afraid that his Kadoos boss will fire him if disobeyed his orders

Arnav: (Chuckling) that's true ... but Rahul will plan something with the orphanage kids so that I will not refuse. I told you right, it was like that until we joined Harvard.

Khushi: Hmm

Arnav: Anyway leave that, you had dinner?

Khushi: No, Kiddu and Dad were playing video games, once they finish we are going to have it

Arnav was about to reply but heard some sounds and looked back to see Anjali and Sheetal standing on the room doorstep eavesdropping his conversation. That is something he never likes if somebody does that, overhearing one's conversation. And now it was Anjali and that Ms. Jha who did this and that too his private conversation with his wife. He looked at them furiously which made them avert their eyes.

Arnav: (In the phone) one second, babes, (Loudly with gritted teeth) Anjali ...  don't you think it is necessary to knock before entering a room also it is too bad to overhear other's talks?

Anjali: Why I have to knock to enter your room, you are my baby brother

Arnav: Cut the **** Anjali ... what's the matter?

Anjali: (Arrogantly) I have something to talk to you

Arnav: (With an irritated expression) wait. (Whispering on phone)Kiya, I will talk to you later ... you have dinner and then call me, Ok?

Khushi: Yeah

While ending the call his eye's fell on the watering can on the poolside and to place it in the garden he went there. Anjali too followed Arnav to his garden but when Sheetal was about to enter

Arnav: (Shouted) Stop right there ... outsiders have no entry here

Sheetal flinched hearing his tone and Anjali pressed her shoulders as if consoling her. They walked into the small lounge with a recliner and two chairs there. Arnav sat on the recliner and Anjali on Chair. Anjali gestured Sheetal to sit beside him but Arnav's one deadly look was enough for her to take the other chair.

Arnav: What you want to talk? Complete it fast ... she will call again

Anjali: Who was it Arnav? And you ... you are talking to a woman at this time of night? (As if explaining to a kid) Arnav ... she may be your client but talking to a lady at this time of night is not good ... you have to consider at least what will others think?

Arnav: Excuse me! ... Anjali, how many times I have to tell you not interfere in my personal matter. I haven't asked you what is good or not for me, and you very well know I will do what I like. So it is better if you store it in your thick head. And for your information it was my friend, not any client

Anjali: Oh so it was not a business call. Who is that friend for whom you will even ignore your Di?

Arnav: (Irritated with her talks) my girlfriend

Anjali: ARNAV! ... what the hell are you talking about? How can you have a girlfriend? You said you don't like it when I interfere in your personal matter. But now this concerns Sheetal too

Arnav: What the! ... what is she has to do with it? And why can't I have a girlfriend? Of course, I can have one if that is both of us want

Anjali: You are kidding right... Arnav you know you can't have a girl friend when you are committed to Sheetal and you have to fulfill my wish

Arnav: Excuse me ... I don't remember any engagement happened nor any marriage then can you explain to me how I am committed to her? ... (Chuckling slightly) Anjali it is better you come out of your illusion. I am going to marry a girl whom I love not your choice and definitely not your SIL

Anjali: And you think we will allow you to marry a random person?

Arnav: And I don't remember asking anyone's permission for it nor I need one to take decisions on my life. You better understand that and put that into Ms. Jha's head too ... and ... yeah now please go I have work to complete before she calls

Saying this he faked a smile at them making Anjali walk away stomping her feet angrily. She directly went to Dadi's room followed by Sheetal and Mami who was waiting for them outside. Arnav started his work so that it gets complete before Khushi calls. Anjali was hell angry and fuming so Sheetal narrated the entire conversation to Dadi and Mami and at last, started crying remembering his harsh words.

Dadi: Sheetal Bitiya you please stop crying, he said all that just to make Anju angry ... and Anju you know he will react like this then why you are hell-bent on making him mad?

Anjali: But what does he think of himself Dadi? Hu! I am his Di and I have full right on him like Mamma-Papa. And what did he said ... he will not marry my choice but I guess he doesn't know what Panditji said he will marry only as per Parent's choice. (Determined) Papa like Sheetal and when he comes I will make sure this marriage happens at any cost

Dadi: Yeah, that's right. (Turning to Sheetal) Bitiya doesn't worry once Manav comes back everything will be good. (But somewhere her gut feelings said that it is not going to be that good as she knows Manav will agree with Arnav if he wants to marry someone he likes) Anyway, you both go and sleep. And Anju ... Manav called me sometimes before and said he will come only after two days but some of his acquaintance are coming tomorrow. He said to clean two rooms and to make the people comfortable

Anjali: (Sighing in relief) Really? Then I am relaxed Dadi as Papa will be here soon, as his guests are coming. This time I will make sure Arnav's marriage happen. Waise Dadi, who is coming?

Dadi: I guess someone related to business, he said Akash to receive them at evening as he knows them ... so please inform him that

Anjali: Okay Dadi I will tell to Bhaiyya

Next day

It was evening and everyone except Arnav, Anjali, and Sheetal was sitting in the living room waiting for the guests. Arnav was as usual in office. Anjali and Sheetal had gone shopping. Lavanya was sitting on the sofa after a bath sipping tea as it was a long day for her and she was tired. She was not interested in their stupid family talk and was thinking about the plans she made along with Rahul and Naina. But as she heard some guests are coming out of curiosity she settled there with her coffee. Suddenly calling bell was heard. HP opened the door and found Akash and he ordered him to pick the luggage from the car. Akash entered the living room with a girl, a lady, and a man.

(The girl, lady and man's attire)

All looked at their attires and DR (Devil Raizadas) thought they were from some foreign country because as per them Indians will not ... or better to say should not wear dresses like this. Dadi ushered them inside as they were 'guests' and everyone settled in the living room. Akash horrified thinking how to break the news to his family that, this is the same Kiddu and Kiya, but someone's squeal 'LAAVUUUUUUUUUU' broke his thought process.

Yes, yes you guys guessed it right. The Khurana siblings are here.

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Part 12 Surprised ASR or Surprised Raizadas (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 76 times)

Lavanya opened her mouth wide seeing the trio in front of her before screaming 

Lavanya: OMG ... OMG Kiddu ... (Hugging her tightly) I can't ... I can't believe that you guys are really here ... wait but Chachu said he will be late

Kiran: Yeah that's true BF will come once he finishes his works, but at any cost, we can't Miss Arnie's birthday right?

Lavanya: Yeah (Grinning) that's also right

Lavanya then hugged Khushi and waved at Nikhil. He looked at her with a sad face as she didn't hug him but and smirked at him

Looking at the people from top to bottom Chachi said

Chachi: Lavanya you know this (Pointing at Kiran) shoratt (Short) dress girl? and these people too who are they? (To Akash) you gone to receive Devarji's guest, right Akash? So where are they?

Before Lavanya can answer Akash took the situation in his arms

Akash: Mamma, let us get inside and I will introduce them. And yes, these are the guests Chachu told about and Lavanya and Arnav too, know them

Kiran: (Murmured) Oh God! Is it some court?

Dadi: Oh! Are they from London? Who are they?

Akash: Yeah Dadi this is Nikhilji Arnav's friend working in AR's London branch. They two are Chachu's friend Kabirji's daughters, this is Kiranji completed her school and this is Khushiji who also completed medicine along with Lavanya

Khushi and Nikhil folded their arms in Namaste while Kiran waved at them. All nodded their head and wished them back.

But soon understanding dawned upon them as they realized this is the same people Arnav is very close with. And now they were afraid, thinking what will happen if Anjali comes to know who the guests actually are. Dadi decided to talk to Anjali before she meets them so that she will not be rude to the guests and will not affect Manav's relation with them.

Kiran heard Akash's introduction and frowned. Since she can't keep her mouth close she said immediately making everyone chuckle at her innocence.

Kiran: Akash Bro, it is just Nikhil, Kabir, Khushi, and Kiran, why are you adding an initial 'G' for us?

Khushi: Kiddu! Shut up ... (To others) er... sorry, everyone, it is just that she is in India for the first time. I ... I will talk to her Dadi. Oops ... sorry, it just came in the flow I hope you don't feel bad if I call you like that.

Dadi: No no, its ok Bitiya, you are like my granddaughter so you can call me like that. (To Kiran) And dear, it is not 'G' it is 'Ji' added as a suffix to show our respect towards people here

Kiran just nodded her head since she was getting bored as she did not at all lived in the atmosphere covered with so many elders and also she couldn't understand most of their talks in fluent Hindi. When they settled down she was sitting beside Lavanya and both were mumbling to each other.

Kiran: Lavu, where is Arnie?

Lavanya: Not home yet

Kiran: What? But he never comes this late

Lavanya: He is like this here ... since if he comes early he will have to listen to their stupid marriage jokes

Kiran: Oh ... okay. By the way Lavu, where is Kiya's competitor?

Lavanya looked at her with a puzzled look

Kiran: That one Lavu, Arnie's proposed would-be wife. What's her name? Sheela?

Lavanya: Oh it's Sheetal Kiddu and she is not here, went out to shopping with Anjali Di

Kiran: You mean PT the Puja Thaal?

Lavanya: Yep

Dadi asked Khushi about her Dadi-Dada a and she replied they are no more. Then the conversation went about her relatives which Dadi seemed to know and Nikhil too was actively giving the necessary information. Lavanya shook her head seeing her BF's efforts to impress her family.

Just then Anjali and Sheetal entered and Dadi to avoid any problems asked everyone to join in dinner. But the trio was tired from the journey so they told they wanted to freshen up before dinner, others to have their dinner and they will not mind.

Lavanya volunteered them towards the room saying she too will have dinner with them. Later during dinner, Dadi asked an angry Anjali to be calm as they were their guests now. Anjali nodded grudgingly and Sheetal who identified Khushi as the girl in Arnav's phone was very much tensed as Arnav's words from yesterday night were still ringing in her ears.

After dinner, everybody settled in living room to have a family time. Nikhil was already there and was casually talking with Akash about sports. Khushi too came towards them and Lavanya pulled her beside. Anjali even though doesn't like Khushi was talking to her as she was her father's guest. Lavanya was enjoying Anjali's irritation and that's when she heard the SUV. She grinned thinking now it will be so much fun.

Arnav was hell tired today and very badly wanted to have a cold shower. HP opened the door for him, he smiled at him as HP was very loyal to him and not in the DR's side as other servants.

Arnav: Hari ... what is with this loud noise? (Sarcastically)what is that Sheetal Bitiya did today that they are this happy?

HP: It is not her Bhaiyya, there are some guests

Arnav: Oh ... okay, they have guests, nice as it is not about the stupid Sheetal. Anyway, I am hell tired to entertain the guests so please so bring my coffee in the room

HP chuckled at Arnav's dislike towards that lady. He knows Arnav have someone in his life from Lavanya and always says him to show her, which he never did.

Arnav was striding towards his room thinking it to be one of his Chachi's kitty party. When he reached the bottom of stairs Khushi saw him and called him forgetting the environment.

Khushi: Arnav ...

Arnav: (To himself) Kiya!

Arnav jerked his head and saw Khushi sitting beside Lavanya and Nikhil too is there. Lavanya's wink was enough to prove him that he was not dreaming. He reached her in long strides and pulled her in a bone-crushing hug burying his head in her hairs and whispered.

Arnav: Hey, I missed you ... I missed you a lot baby

Khushi: I missed you too

Arnav: Wait, you guys are here? I mean Dad said he will be late

Khushi: Dad said the truth only, he will come later. So ... how was my surprise?

Arnav: Indeed beautiful

He realized as Dad is not here and that means his family doesn't know his relation with Khushi. So he sighed and broke the hug. Nikhil came toward them and they shared a buddy hug.

Arnav: How are you Dude?

Nikhil: Cool and I know, now you too are (Winked at him)

Arnav: True man and hey you are in Kurta? (Smirking) totally planning to impress your would-be in-laws ...ha? Hmm ... not bad

Nikhil was about to retort but their talk was stopped as Kiran ran down the stairs seeing Arnav and launched herself into his arms.

Kiran: ARNIEEEEEEE ... I missed you sooooooo much

He picked her up from the ground in the hug chuckling freely

Arnav: Me too Kiddu ... me too (He broke the hug but kept her in his arms) so ... the first rank is sure, right?

Kiran: Why not? After all, I have world's best tutor (Winked at him)

Arnav: (Chuckling) don't flatter me too much yaar. By the way, when you guys came? And did you had dinner?

Lavanya: No Bro we were waiting for you. You go freshen up and come we will have it together

Kiran: Yeah, come fast Arnie I am very hungry and I have a looooooot to talk to you

Arnav chuckled at her and ruffled her hair. All family was looking at the new avatar of ASR with open mouths except Akash and Lavanya. They were very upset to see his closeness with the ladies, but then thought it may be the influence of foreign culture. And Lavanya stifled her laugh seeing Sheetal's horrified expression.

Arnav saw Anjali who was very angry to see his closeness to them. So he deliberately said

Arnav: Sure Kiddu. Now as you guys are here, (Looking intently at Khushi) I am all yours

All frowned not getting his words. But Anjali knows he said that to irritate her, so she gritted her teeth to control her anger. Arnav smirked at her expressions and started towards his room.

HP: Bhaiyya your coffee

Arnav took the coffee still smiling.

HP: Bhaiyya can I ask you something (Seeing his nod) you look so much happy seeing them do you ... do you know them?

Arnav: (Smirked) Hari ... you wanted to see my girl right? Look there the one in blue, that's my Kiya, your Bhabhi

HP looked at Khushi shocked and then back at Arnav who winked back at him. His jaw dropped and Arnav once again smirked and ran up now his tiredness vanished in thin air. All looked at the happy ASR with a shocked expression

Sorry for the delay guys

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Part 13 Shoch treatment for 'DR' (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 78 times)


Chachi: Hello hi bye bye, someone please pinch me, is this really the 'fire-breathing ASR'?

The 'DR' nodded their head agreeing with the same while Lavanya and her gang were controlling their laugh. Lavanya thought picture abhi baki hai (picture is still on) DR just wait and watch and smirked.

Anjali was about to say something but Dadi pressed her hands to make her remember that the guests are still there.

Then Lavanya with the help of HP, Sheetal, and Payal laid the table happily as finally, her gang is here. Dadi, Chachi, and Anjali too sat with them talking to know more about their relationship with Arnav. Kiran was impatiently waiting for Arnav as he was not there on her prom night and she has a lot to share. Lavanya too settled with them and Payal and Sheetal just stood to serve food and dismissed HP.

Then they all saw Arnav coming towards them and settled in his usual chair. Kiran and Khushi were sitting on both sides of him and he smiled at them. (The first shock for DR)

Kiran: Finally ... you came and Arnie, why did you take this how much time? (Pouting) that too when I had told you I was hungry ... and hey is this time to come home? (Sarcastically) by the way, how many times I have to tell you we have to work for living not the other way around? (The second shock for DR)

Arnav: (Sighed) Ok my mom, I am sorry. (The third shock for DR) will keep it in mind next time.

Now leave it and come let us have food, I am damn hungry

Lavanya served herself while Payal served Nikhi. Sheetal was about to serve Arnav but Khushi didn't notice it and as usual, served him making him smile at her. Sheetal felt ignored and stepped back. Khushi then served Kiran and Arnav served Khushi. (The fourth shock for DR) Seeing Sheetal's fallen face Dadi said

Dadi: Arnav how is the salad?

As he doesn't want to be rude to the elder lady unnecessarily he was about to taste it, but before it reached his mouth Khushi held his hand and he looked at her questioningly.

Khushi: No ... don't eat it

Chachi: Why? Why shouldn't he eat that? It is made with a special recipe by Sheetal

Hearing the name he was about to spat on them, but before that

Khushi: (Turning towards Sheetal) is this how you cook? Without knowing about the ingredients?

Sheetal: (Who was well irritated) I know what to cook and how to cook. You don't have to teach me and for your information, I am doing this daily

DR nodded their head supporting her

Khushi: (Pressed Arnav's hand to control his anger) Oh really, then tell me is it have beans in it?

Sheetal: Yes, so what? ... Look Khushiji, if you don't like it you don't have to eat that but why are you blocking Arnavji?

All looked at Khushi questioningly as if agreeing with her. Arnav was hell irritated to see them insulting Khushi and supporting Sheetal. He was about to retort, but Khushi again pressed his arms tightly and blinked at him, which cooled him down. (Fifth shock for DR)

Khushi: Look Sheetal, I am sorry if I am rude, but it is not about my like or dislike. Now only you said you are cooking daily. So how can you put beans in it and most importantly how can you expect Arnav to have it?

Anjali: What is the problem with beans? I don't understand

Khushi: WHAT? You are asking me what the problem with it is. Unbelievable! ... please don't tell me you all don't know Arnav can't have it

Dadi: Bitiya ...  what is the problem? please tell us

Khushi: Oh my God you too Dadi? (Shaking her head) I am sorry but I haven't expected this at least from you. Arnav has an allergy towards beans. If he takes even a bit of it he will be having an itching throat and eventually his sound will be gone. You guys even don't know that (Sighing) I am sorry to say this but I am totally disappointed

Khushi looked sad as well as angry since his family doesn't even care about his health. Arnav held her hand under the table and squeezed it. She looked at him and he smiled sadly at her as this is not a new thing for him.

Lavanya knew how much Arnav's health is important for Khushi and how much sad would be she seeing all that. She also was angry as they haven't allowed her in the kitchen saying Sheetal cooks most tasty food. Sensing the gloom between the couple she whispered

Lavanya: Leave it Kiya ... they will not understand. (Loudly and cheerfully) By the way Bro you eat the potato, it is 'Hari Bhaiyya's special' item only for you

They resumed their dinner and everybody was spellbound seeing how much Khushi know about him, care about him, his reactions towards her and the understanding they have. Dadi decided to clear the awkwardness

Dadi: Khushi Bitiya, sorry for the carelessness, she will be careful next time

Khushi: It's ok Dadi. You are elder to me and also ... you don't have to apologize for other's mistake. But please tell whoever is handling the kitchen to be careful while making food. It will cause so much health problems and you know he can't take all type of medicine

Dadi nodded understandingly and Khushi faked a smile at her. Arnav understanding that Khushi is still sad thinking about it said to cheer up her

Arnav: Kiya, it's okay ... leave it I didn't have it, also you know I don't like these type of food. I was just taking it as Dadi said so no problem

Saying this he smiled at her and Khushi nodded even though not fully convinced.

Sheetal wanted to cry seeing the scene. Others too were in a frozen state, soon Chachi decided to break the ice.

Chachi: Khushi, how you and Lavanya become phirands (Friends)?

Khushi looked at her questioningly

Chachi: I mean Lavanya is younger than you

All looked towards her but Kiran answered the question for her

Kiran: That's because she is a double graduate

So now every eye turned towards her and seeing their confusion she said

Kiran: Oh you guys don't know that story? Don't worry I will tell ... you see my lovely sis had dreamt, to become a doctor, that too a surgeon from childhood, but she couldn't attend the entrance exams. So she joined in Arnie's college as his junior and threw her dreams away. But then Arnie became the Knight in shining armor and persuaded her to join medicine after she passed fashion technology. And you know what? Now she has become a threat to her own sister

Again all looked at her questioningly

Kiran: Hey, you know ... my ambition was to become a fashion designer from childhood even though she draws better than me. But I was relieved that she will not come into my area, but now she is a doctor as well as a designer. That's why she is a threat (Pouting) ... but yeah I love her designs, unique! You know she had designed the showstopper dress for last London fashion week of AR and clients was gaga over it and ... yeah, you know what? If Arnie and Kiya together design something, i.e. the 'AK' brand, then I have no say in it! Right, Lav?

Lavanya nodded her head smilingly enjoying her family's shocked face.

All Raizadas and Jhas were listening to Kiran attentively as if they will get any clue from the story but only they understood was Arnav-Khushi were very close and know each other well. While Kiran was super happy as the first time she got a good audience who wasn't asleep hearing her blabber. Khushi shook her head at her usual dramatic explanation. Seeing their curious faces Arnav said hurriedly as he is afraid she will spill the beans before Manav comes

Arnav: Okay ... okay, enough of the history now. Don't you wanna sleep?

Kiran: Hm, definitely but I want to talk to you ...

Arnav: We can wait till tomorrow for that

Kiran: (Sighing) oaky, but you have to take a leave tomorrow and show your place to us

Arnav: Sure, wish granted (Sixth shock for DR) but now go and sleep. I know you all will be hell tired and will be jet-lagged so we should call it a day

Dadi: Yeah, you people go and sleep. You all are comfortable in the guest rooms, right?

All nodded their head and Khushi smirked looking at Arnav. That's when understanding dawned upon him that she is staying in the guest room. His mood suddenly changed to grumpy. DR was surprised seeing his sudden changes but thought to let it go as today is not their day.

Guys, i am sorry i couldn't update before. Very busy schedule in college

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Part 14 A little glimpse to Arnie and La (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 80 times)


Kiran and Lavanya instantly realized his problem and felt pity for him while Nikhil was sailing in the same boat. Arnav and Lavanya were walking them towards their room thinking to get some time alone, but it seems like DR will not let that

Dadi: Beta did you guys unpacked?

Khushi: No Dadi, I thought to do it later, as I am very tired

Dadi: Oh, then let us do one thing, Anju you guys go and help them

Khushi: No ... no its ok Dadi we will manage. We don't want to trouble you guys

Payal: Hey it's ok Khushiji, it is not a trouble at all, we will help you

She then indicated Anjali and Sheetal something and they immediately nodded agreeing with her.

Khushi: Oh, that is so sweet of you people, and Payal (Smiling) you can call me as Khushi as I am younger than you 

Hearing her Arnav murmured in a low voice but enough for the trio to hear 

Arnav: Sweet my foot. Kiddu....don't you think sometimes your sister is really too much? (Gritting his teeth) what was the need to agree with them?

Lavanya: And Bro what happened to these DR?

Arnav: I think it is some plan

Kiran: It is a plan only ... and I think it is to know about your relation with Kiya

Arnav: Yeah, I too think the same. But what to do now (Sulking) she already accepted the offer 

Kiran whispered something to Arnav and they both smirked at each other and winked towards Lavanya and Nikhil. They immediately understood it to be their joint prank. 

And as per their plan Arnav said he is waiting for some conference call and he is going to his room. Khushi was sad as he left so early but not shown it in front of others since she don't want them to be suspicious.

Sheetal and Payal literally attacked their suitcases while Anjali was observing Khushi and Kiran. Kiran was irritated as she can't tolerate the parasites here now, but as her sweet sister will not understand all that. So she settled in the couch taking her laptop going through social networking sites. Anjali not at all liked her demeanor and vice versa as Kiran was much suffocated under her scrutinizing gaze. Khushi then got a call and went out to the balcony 

As the trio started to unpack the clothes they were very surprised as Kiran's bag was literally like a boy's expect some designer dresses. Lavanya was enjoying their shock sitting beside Kiran.

Among those boyish dresses they found some wonderful creations from AR with AK written on it and instantly identified it as the design by Arnav and Khushi together as Kiran explained earlier. And even though they were angry to see the initials together they couldn't disagree with Kiran's words as it was indeed outstanding.

Now only Anjali understood the meaning of 'AK' which she had seen in Manav's suit once. 'So this is going on from a long time. I have to talk to Papa about Arnav's marriage with Sheetal before it is too late' , thought an angry and worried Anjali

Anjali came back from her dreamland hearing Sheetal and Payal gasping together. 

She too reached there and saw an album containing different pictures of Arnav and Lavanya's stay at London including different functions, outings and so on. There were even pages dedicated to a single person like Kiran, Arnav etc. 

Their  jaws were literally down seeing the 'Cute Arnie' and 'hot La' with their friends.

Their jaws were literally down seeing the Cute Arne and hot La with their friends

Before they can tear it apart out of curiosity Kiran snatched it from Sheetal as the next few pages were of Arshi marriage

Before they can tear it apart out of curiosity Kiran snatched it from Sheetal as the next few pages were of Arshi marriage 

Kiran: Excuse me that's mine and don't you know it is bad manners to look into other's personal things.

Anjali: Look Kiran you are our guest but don't talk rudely with her. What is the problem if we saw them? It has Lavanya and Arnav too, anyway who told it to be a bad manner? Arnav is my baby brother and he don't like hide anything from me

Kiran: Oh really! Let me ask Arnie then

Arnav: What is that you want to ask me Kiddu?

All turned their head to see Arnav standing at the door. Anjali paled instantly knowing what to come.

Kiran: Nothing Arnie, your sister was saying she know everything about you

Arnav: (Raised his eyebrow looking at Anjali) Oh really! Since when? 

Anjali looked at him angrily and he smirked

Arnav: By the way Kiddu what manners were you talking about?

 Kiran smirked at Anjali who was fuming and said innocently 

Kiran: yaar I was telling her it is bad manners to see an album without the owner's permission. Isn't it?

Arnav: Definitely, who told you otherwise? 

Kiran just shrugged at him indicating its nothing and he smiled at her

Arnav: Anyway leave that ... Lavu I was looking for you

Khushi too came there hearing Arnav's voice.

Lavanya: Yes bro

Arnav: Rahul was trying on your number from a long time, but it was in voice mail so he informed me ... he wanted to discuss something important with you so you please call him

Lavanya nodded at him. Kiran and Khushi smiled as they know it is about the birthday plan while others frowned hearing the news.

Arnav: Anjali at least now let them sleep, they may be jet legged. And if you want you can help them tomorrow 

He said smirking at her as he very well know it is not due to her helping mentality she is doing it

Arnav and Lavanya moved out followed by the devil trio. But just as everyone gone out Arnav turned around and shared a wink with Kiran which went unnoticed by Khushi. 

And now Khushi and Kiran were alone in the room. Kiran was ready to execute the plan while Arnav was smirking to himself inside his room. 

Soon he heard quarrelling noise from the guest room.

In guest room

Kiran: Kiya, where you kept my iPod? 

Khushi: Kiddu, you would have placed it somewhere. How would I know?

Kiran: You should know, you are the one who approved your SILs to arrange everything. So now don't stand like a post and check the poolside

Khushi: Kiddu I am hell tired, you only go and check 

Kiran: Won't you do that much for me? You are my sweet sis na, please ... please Di

Khushi sighed and gone to poolside but as soon as she stepped out of the room, Kiran closed the door.

Khushi: Kiddu! Why the hell did you close the door? Open the door damn it

She was irritated and constantly knocking on the door but Kiran didn't respond to it

Khushi: Kiddu, I am hell tired yaar. You can play your pranks other time. I wanna sleep, I will....

She couldn't complete her sentence as she was engulfed in an embrace from behind. She was about to yell but the person closed her mouth instantly.

Arnav: (Huskily in her ear) Without me?

Khushi: Huh! 

He removed his hands from her mouth and she said 

Khushi: Arnav!

Arnav: (Turning her around) who else will dare to enter ASR's territory?

Suddenly she remembered something and said sarcastically trying to come out of his hold 

Khushi: you hadn't slept yet? I thought you were having a conference call

Arnav: (Hugging her) Okay ... okay sorry. I was irritated as I wanted to be with you and they came in the middle (Sighing) now leave all that (Nuzzling her neck) Kiya ... Baby, I missed you so much yaar (Hugging even more tightly)

Khushi: (Smiling) me too Arnav (After sometime) wait ... wait so it was your plan? 

Arnav: (Innocently ) plan ... what plan ? I didn't get you?

She turned around angrily to hit him. And as he was sure she will attack him he started to run around the pool and ... finally, he himself picked her from behind.

Khushi: (Hitting his chest) you moron, always do that. Arrey where are you taking me? Put me down, you idiot let me go and sleep. You know I will wake up late, so at least let me sleep early then maybe ... and yeah you yourself look very tired so thus now go and sleep 

Arnav: What? No way, you will sleep with me and (Winking) don't worry I know how to play with them. So chill 

Then avoiding all her protests he took her to his  ... no their room, placed her on the bed and covered with the blanket. Then closing the doors and curtains he too crawl beside her.

Khushi: But...

Arnav: (Placed his finger on her lips) Shh...shut up and sleep

Khushi pouted at first but then slept hugging him tightly as she too wanted to sleep in his arms. 

DR too fell asleep without knowing about the coming storms in their life.

Guys, i am busy with my schedules. That is why the delay. And Shrenu fans don't worry .Sheetal will realise she is not in love with Arnav and that is only an attraction and later will find her Mr.right.

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Should i continue
Apr 5, 2017

Apology (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 50 times)

Guyz, my laptop is not with me and i am at an industrial training now. once i get back home i will update the story. A very big sorry for who like my story.

Apr 10, 2017

Part 15 Is ASR opening up? (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 70 times)


It was morning and Khushi stretched herself hearing the morning aarti. She immediately sat up on the bed fearing as it was her first day here; she got up late and that too in Arnav's room. But soon she realized she is in the guestroom and Kiran was nowhere to be seen. She was about to get up when she saw a note on the side table. It read,

Good morning my lazy girl

As usual, you were in a tight sleep, and I didn't have the mind to disturb you. So even before anybody got up I got you there. I am going for a jog with Nikhil and Kiddu. And now since you got up like my good wifey go and fresh up, but only go down to the den with me or Lavu. See you soon.

P.S: Already missing you



She smiled reading it and headed for bathroom not before nicely placing the note in her diary.

DR finished the Morning Prayer and Sheetal was offering the Prasad to everyone. Chachi and Anjali, as usual, was blaming Lavanya and praising Sheetal.

Anjali: Chachi, I told you, this Lavanya has forgotten all the good mannerisms staying abroad. Look at Sheetal, even though she is younger than Lavanya got up early and doing everything appropriately. When will this girl start to learn something from Sheetal?

Chachi: You please talk to her once Anju, she is about to get married, she can't be like this all her life

Anjali: I will Chachi and don't worry then she will be apt bahu for Kaki

Chachi: And I think these all are the problems of the gang she is in. You see her friends too are like her ... I mean nobody is present for the Morning Prayer

Anjali: Yeah Chachi, Nikhil is a boy at least, but Khushi and Kiran are girls. How can they be like this? They have to go to their in law's house one day or other. Especially Khushi, she is the elder one, so she has to guide her little sister. But instead she herself is not up yet. How can these girls be like this? No culture at all...

Anjali was going on and on without the awareness of the surroundings. But all were startled hearing a roar 'ENOUGH' from the door. All looked back to see the fire-breathing ASR along with not so pleasant Nikhil and an angry Kiran, all in their sweaty jogging attire. 

The trios attire

(The trio's attire) 

Arnav marched towards Anjali and stood in front of her in the total ASR avatar.

Arnav: Anjali, how dare you? And who gave you permission to talk ill about them?

Anjali: Why are you shouting? I haven't said anything wrong. You are behaving like I am not telling the truth. Only Kiran and Nikhil are with you, where is Khushi? Not up yet, right? So now you only tell me is this a time to wake up? She is old enough to understand all this ... and she is a girl, so she has to behave like one. So now tell me what wrong did I say? And look at her (Pointing at Sheetal) she woke up early morning, helped in the kitchen, then completed the puja ... see that's why I said she is perfect to be a Raizada Bahu and

Arnav, even when he was in full rage was controlling himself to not to blast upon her before everyone in the morning itself. The anger bubbling inside was increasing notch by notch and when Anjali said Sheetal is better than Khushi, all the control vanished in thin air and he leaned towards Anjali and said in a threatening voice.

Arnav: ANJALI ... don't ... not a word more. How dare you? How dare you to comment on Kiya's character even without knowing anything her? What do you know about being an elder sister that you are bad mouthing her? And most of all how dare you to compare Kiya with this girl? This stupid behenji? Who is living now too with some old century believes? (Here for Arnav the marriage should happen between people with same wavelength and culture, that's all. No offense please)

Chachi: Hello hi bye bye Arnav. Why are you shouting? What Anju said is true, being the elder one, Khushi has to teach her sister good manners and most importantly when they are orphans. I think her parents hadn't taught her all these

Kiran was very angry when Anjali said Khushi is a bad sister, but when Chachi mentioned them as orphans, she welled up instantly and a sob escaped her lips. Arnav was already on the verge of self-control blasted to Anjali and Chachi once he saw his ever-strong Kiddu crying

Arnav: ENOUGH CHACHI. It is better if you stop it now, or else I may say something that you will not be able to take it. And Anjali, it is better you think before talk; otherwise, it will not be good

Chachi: Arnav! Is this a way to talk to your elders? Why are you overreacting for these small things?

Akash: And Arnav how can you say Anjali is not a good sister?

Arnav, who always bottled his pain of not having a family who loves him as he is, now lost all the self-control and opened up,

Arnav: Oh really? (Sarcastically) you are right; Anjali is the best sister, but only for you Akash and what you said Chachi? I am overreacting! Like seriously! You will tell everything you feel like and it is a problem if I react to it too ... nice, very nice

Kiran was about to run upstairs as she couldn't take those words anymore, but Arnav was even faster than her, so he caught hold of her hands before she could escape and brought her down with him. He side hugged her over shoulders and rubbed her arms relaxing her. 

Arnav: I am telling this for once and all and I will not like to repeat all these. First of all, never and ever say that Kiya and Kiddu are orphans, they have Lavu, Nikhil, Dad and most importantly me. And Anjali, listen to me carefully, Kiya is my best friend ... no much more than that (Sighing) and for me Lavu and Kiddu are equal. You all very well know I will not tolerate anything against my family and which include them. And they both are well aware of the good and bad manners, and for all your information it is not written in the Indian constitution that everybody should rise before sunrise, it is about their comfort and health. Kiddu like to jog with me and is an early riser, but it should not mean Kiya too should be like her because every person is different. And she is a doctor and thus well aware of her health conditions. We cannot call it as bad manners at all just because we are not like that. And yeah one more thing even if they have any bad manners then understand it ... it is only due to my influence on them and also you cannot blame her without knowing anything about her

Arnav: And secondly, dare you to call Kiya as a bad sister when you don't know anything about them, I have been seeing their bond from years. And Anjali maybe you are right, Kiya is not looking after her as her sister but as her baby from her birth since Mamma was bedridden from Kiddu's birth. She knows every single detail about her little one unlike you, who is acting as if she is the younger one. And do not even think about bad mouthing Mamma-Papa. They were Mom-Dad's friends and after Mom gone other than Lavu and Dad I found a family with them. I again found the warmth of a mother in Mamma after Mom, and Papa was equal to Dad for me, so think thousand times before saying anything about Arnav Singh Raizada's Mamma-Papa.

Everybody was hell shocked hearing his outburst and speechless as they were like slapped hearing him saying they are not treating him as a family member. They had so many doubts in their minds starting from him calling Kabir- Gayathri as Papa-Mamma and he treating Khushi & Kiran as if they are his family but did not have the guts to speak in front of the angry ASR.

In all this Dadi was standing silently and was observing Arnav carefully and after today's outburst, she was sure about one thing ... that for him Khushi and her family meant a lot and he may even go against anybody, including his family for them.

But hearing all that Anjali was hell angry especially as he called Khushi as a better sister than her and it hurt her ego.

Anjali: ARNAV ... how can you say I am not a good sister and how can you say that Khushi is a better sister than me

Arnav: Why shouldn't I? (Sighing) okay ... just answer some of my questions and you will get your answer yourself

Anjali: What questions

Arnav: Simple questions your highness, just tell me which is my favorite color, food, place, brands of dress and toiletries, favorite actor, actress, movie, book, author anything? Oh no ... no don't even try to guess, I know you don't know all these answers but you know what? If you ask Kiya she can tell you which food Kiddu want to eat, which movie she wants to see, the book she wants to read ... according to her mood! ... unbelievable! Isn't it?

Anjali: Voh...

Arnav: What happened? Princess Anjali's mooh band gayi? (Stopped talking) ... and one more thing Anjali, you all have never ever bothered to make a special cup of coffee for me other than Hari and Lavu and sometimes Dad. Nobody here had ever asked me what I want to eat particularly other than to impress me sometimes. But you know what? Kiya even in her busy schedule makes every meal for Kiddu with her own hands! How ironic isn't it? (Sighing sadly) you know sometimes I had felt jealous of Kiddu to have an elder sister like Kiya but ... (Composing himself) so think before saying something which you don't know

Chachi: But Arnav

He had enough of their rubbish and showed her his hand indicating to stop.

Arnav: I am no more interested in any nonsense now Chachi, (Turning to Kiran) And Kiddu, why are you crying over her silly words? Bacha you and I both know how good your sister is, so don't waste your tears on them, okay? Now come, fresh up and get ready fast. Don't you remember we have planned an outing? So come ... Nikhil

Nikhil nodded at him understanding his unspoken words and they were about to climb the stairs. 

Sheetal was a silent spectator all this while but she can't allow her Arnavji to go without having Prashad right? So she went towards them. 

Nikhil received it as it was an offering, Kiran just said a 'No thanks' which made all of them frown as if they are seeing ASR's female version but chose to not to comment on it. Sheetal then called Arnav from the back as he still hadn't turned around 

Sheetal: Arnavji Prashad

Arnav gritted his teeth and blasted upon her

Arnav: (To Sheetal) Look Ms. Jha ... I don't know why the hell you are behind me for wasting your life but take this directly to your head I am not interested in you. And do you know why?... You may be the perfect sanskari bahu for any family and even for my family ... but you can never be my better half. You see the name itself telling the relation the two people are sharing- 'better half' and thus my partner should be equal for me, not like my slave or something. And you see I am in the fashion industry and also born and brought up in foreign countries ... and I have a high concern that my wife should be able to cope up with my surroundings as well as my culture (To DR) also this is I am saying for all your information, you all know, I don't like to be attached to God much other than if it is necessary. So don't take IT as a tool for Ms.Jha to come close to me. And yeah she may be traditional and apt for this family, but I don't need a traditional idiot wife who treats me as some God which is more than enough according to you but I want a partner who can understand me, guide me and simply love me and care for me. (Sighing) I know you all know nothing about my likes and dislikes, but at least try to find out it by the things I do, and the people I like to be with. In simple, before going towards the opinion of society at least try to understand the members of own family.

Anjali was about to say something but Arnav gestured her to stop

Arnav: I am no more interested in this rubbish anymore and getting very late, so please excuse us.

Saying this Arnav, Kiran and Nikhil went upstairs with an upset and angry family and a tearful Sheetal behind.

Guys, my heartfelt apology for my readers for the late update. I reached home in evening only, and my story is not a completely written one, so it may take time for the next update, but I will try to be regular soon since now it is time for study leave. Sorry once again guys


Voting: (Total Votes: 92)

Should i continue
Apr 16, 2017

Teaser for next part (By Maahiak) (Thanked: 43 times)

He silently entered into his room and leaned on the closed door and his eyes instantly welled up as he was missing his Mom terribly. He wiped off his tears angrily masking the ASR avatar only to standstill as he came face to face with his love, his life, his Kiya. Her eyes were puffy red and were also welled up indicating him that she had heard everything that happened downstairs. He was very much afraid as she recently was back to those terrific attacks and what happened now will only act as a fuel to them. But what happened next was completely unexpected by him

The update is coming soon.Guys I know i am late again, but what to do my laptop had a complaint and it got corrected now. So a heartfelt apology for the delay.

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