Do Dil Ek Jaan *dIS CONTINUED*

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Jan 7, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 27 times)


PROLOGUE <\br>

Arnav:-she is my wife.mera pehala pyaar.kehati hai pehala pyaar special hotha hai.wo meri patni di hai aur hamesha rahungi.kabhi saath nahi ****ungi uski. <\br>

Rudra:- pehala ya aakhri pyaar tho pyaar hotha hai.bahuth pyaar karthi hai mein use.uski kushi keliye agar mein uski zindagise jaana padega tho hamesha keliye chali javunga. <\br>

Kushi:- kyu kar rahi ho tum lok ? kyu? <\br>

Arnav and Rudhra :- because I love you kushi<\br>

This is a triangle love story of 3persons.in this story Rudhra plays a lead character like arnav. shall I continue my story. <\br>


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Jan 7, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 32 times)

the story starts where Arnav tells kushi she is the biggest mistake in his life and that all the bad things happening around him because of her. < br> Arnav:- you are the biggest mistake of mine kushi.when you came to my life all the bad things started to happen. <\br>

saying those words to kushi he left from there.kushi is completely shattered hearing those words from him.tears are continuously flowing down her cheeks. after some time she wipe her tears and she got up from there. <\br>

kushi ( in mind):- yes I'm the biggest mistake of his life. today he said that. so I should leave his life forever. I have no right to ruin his life. <\br>

she took a paper wrote some thing and placed on the table. she packed her things and left from R.M<\br>

IN Railway station <\br>

she purchased a ticket to Udaipur .she sat her seat and some times later the train started to move. she diverted her thoughts. <\br>

kushi :- hey devimayya why you punishing me like this? I don't know what to do and where to go please help me and give all happiness to Arnavji. <\br>

in these thoughts she fall in to sleep.she is not aware of that what's waiting for her in udaipur and that will change her whole life and that too related with her past<\br>

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Jan 30, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 39 times)


in Udaipur

BSD camp

Brigadier:- Raj the situation is out of control where is he?

Raj:- sir woo.... woo..I don't know.

Brigadier:- what ......you don't know? call him only he can control this situation.

Raj:- ji sir

he dialed a number

Raj: hello sir

…………………………………………

Raj:- sir the situation is out of control and Brigadier sir wants to meet you

……………………………………………… ..

Raj:- ok sir

he cut the call

Brigadier:- Raj what he said? where is he?

Raj:- sir he is on the way

in RM

Arnav came to his room after a long drive. he was damn tired.he lay down the bed and his tiredness make him fall in a deep sleep

In train

Kushi slowly wakeup from the sleep.she see her surrounding's and remembered what happened in home. she slowly closed her eyes.

Kushi(in mind):- hey devimayya next station is Udaipur.I don't know what to do and where go please help me

the train reached the station and Kushi get down from the train.she looked the whole station. it was a small station and some peoples were chit chatting there.she moved towards the taxi stand

kushi:- Bhai Saab I want to go Ram nagar

the taxi driver looked kushi

taxi driver:- you are alone?

Kushi:- ha

taxi driver:- mmm .....get in

he started the car. sometimes later he suddenly stopped the car. she looked the place .the two sides of road surrounded by deserts.she looked him

kushi(scared):- what happened? why you stopped here?

taxi driver:- don't worry madam.no one will saw as

Kushi:- what you mean?

taxi driver:- don't try to be smart nobody is here to save you

he starts to misbehaves with her

Kushi:- please leave me....Arnavji......Arnavji………………………

same time in RM

Arnav:- kushi……………

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Feb 1, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 17 times)

dear friends, do you want my story to continue ?actually some of my friends said to me don't continue this story because of that I want your opinion so please tell me

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Feb 5, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 21 times)


Arnav jerked from his sleep

Arnav:- I am not deaf kushi.why are you shouting . kushi...kushi……where is she?

he checked whole around the room but he didn't find anyone there.he came downstairs and see the whole family members sitting there except kushi

Arnav:- di did you see kushi?

Anjali:- kushiji, we didn't see her

Manorama:- actually Arnav bitwa she didn't came downstairs from yesterday.

Arnav:- what she didn't come here then where she go?

Payal:- what she is not in your room?

Arnav:- no

Payal:oh god then where she went?

nani:- payal call her friends ask them they know anything about her?

payal:ha naniji

Manorama:- Arnav bitwa where are you going now?

Arnav:- I will search her outside. and Akash if you don't mind can you search her in the bus stand

Akash:- of course bhai

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Feb 5, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 33 times)


Payal:- If you got any details of her then please inform me

Akash:-mmm

Payal:- where she went? oh DM please save her

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IN UDAIPUR
< br>kushi saw a man passing by the car on his jeep.kushi keeps begging for help from him

kushi(crying):please help me please...

but he doesn't react. he simply drives by the car.

Driver:- see no one will help you. so don't try to escape from me

the driver starts molesting her again. kushi keeps screaming for help

they saw the man spins his jeep and stops in front of them.he gets off from his jeep. kushi pushed the driver and ran towards him. he just looked her unblinkingly.

Kushi:- please help me..he……he tries...to molesting... me … ple..base

The man:- pa..ro....paro you here...

Driver:- hello hero leave her and go from here

The driver comes closer to Kushi she hold his hand tightly in fear.he removed kushi's hand and makes her stand behind him.he steps towards the driver and started to beat the driver again and again.

he looked kushi.she is in tears.the driver tries to strangle him from behind. he throws him to the ground and beated him madly.the driver points a gun at kushi.suddenly he turns kushi around and they roll on the ground. the driver in the mean time try to flee but the man runs after him.

the driver shoots him .he get hurt and the wound starts to bleeding..kushi is shocked. he catches the driver and snatched the gun and shoots him.

Kushi(in fear):- nooooooo…………………

the man looked kushi .that makes her terrified. he run towards her and Kushi faints in his arms

the man:- paro.....paro ...paro please walk up ...paro………………(he shouted)


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Feb 7, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 17 times)


The man:- Paru…………… paru Walk up ..paru(he shouted)

he lift her up and start walking on the sand to reach his jeep.The BSD officers spot them and they salute him.

1st officer:- sir bhabi

2nd officer:- what happened to her?where you got her? < /br>

3rd officer:- Rudra answer our questions.

yes the man is none other than Rudra.The Major Rudra Pratap Ran away.kushi is lying on the floor. while their questions he splashes water on her face. she opened her eyes slowly.

Kushi:- Arnavjiii.....Arnavjiii..

they all looked her confused. she looked them and when she saw Rudra she get scared.


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Feb 8, 2016

Do Dil Ek Jaan (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 42 times)


when she saw Rudra she get scared

Rudra:- paru don't worry. I am here.don't get scared.

he shook her. she looked him confused then she saw his hand.it is still bleeding. kushi tore her duppatta and tied his wound.

Rudra:- paru ...relax.....see nothing happened to me..... paru..

he looked the officers and indicate them to leave. they leave from there.

Rudra:- Paru...come.. get up.

Kushi(confused and scared):- Paru..you...mistaken... me...I am..not....paru....my..name.. is..kushi.....kushi Arna..(she stopped a pause and said) .kushi Gupta.....

Rudra:- what kushi? what nonsense are you talking Paru.what happened to you? is everything fine?
< br>he looked her confused. kushi again felt dizziness. she faints again

Rudra:- Paru...paru....oh no kushi...kushi..walk up

he slowly lift her up and put her in his jeep.Rudra starts his jeep and sees kushi from the rear view mirror. A blue butter fly comes near to them. Rudra dialed Raj's number. he picked the call

Raj:- sir

Rudra:- Raj come to Hospital immediately

Raj:- Sir

he disconnect the call.

Rudra(in mind):- if she is not my paru then who is she? and she is exactly like paru but who is Arnav? I want to collect her details

IN HOSPITAL

Rudra admit her in hospital. she is still unconscious.

Raj:- sir. woo...bhabi

Rudra:- she is not your Bhabi Raj what

Rudra:- ha she is not my paru but she exactly look like my paru

Raj:- but how can this happen?

Rudra:- I don't know. but she is not my paru I can feel that

Raj:- is she said anything about her?

Rudra:- unfortunately no.when she get conscious the only word she said that Arnavji

Raj:- Arnavji? who is he?

Rudra:- may be her husband

Raj:- husband?

Rudra:- ha actually she didn't wear any mangalsuthra but she put sindhoor on her forehead. Raj I want her full details. its really confidential because she is exactly look like paru.if Tejawath saw kushi then he should misunderstand her as paru.it's danger to kushi's life

Raj:- sir

Raj leaves from there

Rudra(in mind):- sorry paru.I can't save you that time but I promise you that I will save kushi from him.I will find kushi's relatives and I will handover her to them as soon as possible

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Jul 21

DO DIL EK JAAN (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 26 times)

IN ANOTHER SIDE OF UDAIPUR

A VERY BIG HAWELI LOOKS LIKE OLD FILMS.MANY GOONS ARE STANDING EVERY PART OF THAT HAWELI.


Image result for old ROYAL PALACE IN INDIA

INSIDE THAT HAWELI

A MAN AGED IN HIS 50'S SITTING ON A CHAIR AND READING HIS NEWS PAPER.SOME GOONS WERE STANDING NEAR TO HIM TO RECEIVE HIS ORDERS. SUDDENLY A MAN COME THERE HE WERE SWETTING

that man:Sir vo....Vo...she... come ....again

One goon:Raghu who come again and why are you swetting 

Raghu: Wo...Major Rudra

Another goon: whattttttttt......Rudra but he is in....

Raghu: wo wapas aagayii uske saath Ranawath sab

Tejawat : uske saath????? kiske saath


tejawat pic

Image result for tarun khanna rang rasiya


Raghu: Paro ke saath

tejawat{in shock and anger}:WHATTTTTTTTTTTTT............. how can this happen i killed her with my own hands then how can this possible No she cant come back again

Raghu: i saw her with that rudra  takur saab  when we are coming back from that sojan's house with his new bride for you then we saw one taxiwala trying to force paru suddenly wo major waha aagaya aur us taxiwaleko tho maar hi diya

Tejawath:then where is she now 

Raghu: wo she is in a hospital with B.S.D protection.

tejawath:is he is with her

Raghu:yes takur saab Vo Uski saath hi hai

Tejawath: if she tell anything which she saw there then we all done.we can not escape from Rudra's anger again .i cant allow this to happen again.i need to do something.chandhu get ready i want her at any cost you got it

chandhu:ji takur saab


in hospital

Kushi opened her eyes slowly.she saw someone standing near to her bed 

Image result for rangrasiya serial


Kushi: wo mein kaha hu??? and who are you

rudra: wo... how is you? are you ok now

Kushi: am fine.Aap wo hena gisne muje bachaya dha

Rudra:ha

Kushi thank you mr.

rudra: Rudra Major Rudra Prathap Ranawath.

Kushi:Kyaaa...aaaaapppp ..military mein hai kya.

Rudra:ha iam a B.S.D officer. if you don't mind can you tell me about you.... wo actually we need to inform your family

Kushi:(in sad)it's ok sir .I don't have anyone to inform.so please muje Jane dijiye


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Jul 30

SORRY NOTE (By Lakshmilovesarshi) (Thanked: 7 times)

HAI GUYS I DIDN'T GET ANY GOOD RESPONSE FOR THIS STORY BECAUSE OF THAT I THINK I SHOULD DISCONTINUE THIS. SORRY FOR THOSE WHO REGULARLY READ THIS STORY BUT I GET ONLY LOW RESPONSE FROM YOU ALL.PLEASE SAY YOUR OPINION .YOUR OPINIONS MEANS LOT TO ME


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