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Mar 17, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha) (Thanked: 46 times)

Hi friends, i am trying to write my way of story, first time making an attempt correct me when required, hope u guys like my story. My story from holi. here it goes like this

On holi day

khushi: nani ji aur anjali ji hume maaf kardijiye humne aap ko jaan booch kar dukh nahi pahuchayi

woh hume na unhone aisa karne par majboor kiya

meanwhile arnav reaches that place

Arnav: khushi tumne kuch jyada hi bhang peeli ab bahuth hogaya chalo chalthe hai

khushi: nahi hume aaj maafi mangna hai

Arnav: kushi chalo tumhe aaraam karna chahiye

khushi: nahi arnav ji hum nahi aayenge

Arnav: use jabardasthi use utake le jatha hai

khushi: chodiye hume chodiye, jab chahe utalethe ho aur kehthe ho door raho meri nazronse

Arnav: look at her with little pain in his eyes

Khushi: hume na aap se bhi kuch pooch na hai, saying this she is about fall he holds her and rabba ve starts

again she says kay hum pooch sakthe hai boliye na, her words broke his trance

Arnav: khushi tum chup chap sojao

Khushi: nahi arnav ji hume aisa kyon hotha hai jab bhi aap hamare paas aathe ho humari dil ki dhadkane hamarri saanso se bhi tej chalne lagthe hai

Arnav: surprised after hearing this question, he says khushi in deep voice

Khushi:bathayiye na aap ko bhi aisa yehsaas huwa

Arnav: he is looking at her puzzled? what he is listening

Khushi: aap hamare saath aise kaise kar sakthe hai?

Humne socha tha ki aap bhi humse

she will faints

Arnav: keep calling her name khushi khushi to bring her back to senses

what she was asking a moment ago

he keep on questioning her abhi tum ne kya kaha

Khushi: woh hum woh hum

Arnav: ha bolo, khushi

Khushi: hame laga tha us din aap humse ikraar karne wale the, paar aap na hum galath the aap ne kabhi humse pyar nahi kiya

Arnav: stood freeze hearing this, khushi faints again in arnav hands, he lift her in his hands and lay her down on bed

Arnav: lost in his thoughts, what she was saying, then what about that day he saw on terrace

so many questions in his mind, when she loves me so much? what the matter between her n jijaji? why she asked him to leave Di? why never she told me that she knows jijaji? with all these questions he turned to her, he went and sit to next to her. he again calls khushi with low voice she got disturbed and turn towards him n hold his waist n sleep nicely.

Mar 17, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha) (Thanked: 43 times)

Khushi: in sleep bathayiye na arnav ji, aisa kyon hotha hai

Arnav: take her into his hands, she keep her head on his shoulders and he hold her with one hand on her waist

Arnav: main batha tha hu ki aisa kyun hotha hai, kyunki jab bhi hum dono saath me hothe hai, hum dono ki dil ki dhadkhane ek ho jathe hai,

Khushi: arnav ka jawab sunthe hi arnav ko ek pyaar bahri nazr se dekhthi hi, tabhi uski ankhon me aasoon aathe hai

Arnav: shhhhh Khushi

Khushi all of sudden she get hiccups

Arnav: mein tumare liye paani latha hu wait

while arnav leaving the room, shyam who was searching khushi to know the truth see arnav coming out of his room immediately he rushed to khushi

shyam:khushi ji hume bathayiye sachayi kya hai, aapne arnav se shaadi kyun ki, hum aap ki madath karenge

Khushi: after seeing shyam her hiccups stops, she says aap aap nashe ki halath me

shyam: bathayiyena khushiji hume jaan na jaroori hai

Khushi: aap humse door rahiye aap bahuth bure ho

shyam : aap hume bathayiye aap ne arnav se shaadi kyun ki, hum chale jayenge

Khushi: paaka

shyam :pakka

Khushi: eyes filled with tears, woh na hume bhi patha nahi, unhone kaha ki hamari jiji ki shaadi rok denge isliye

shyam : look stunned after hearing this, aap dariye math khushiji hum hai aap ke saath

Khushi: nahi hum aap ko pasand nahi karthe , aap chale jao yaha se, nahi tho hum chillayenge

shyam: will leave from that place coz he got what he wanted

Arnav:who stands outside and listen whole conversation between jijaji and khushi, tears falls on his cheeks, what i did to her, he feel ashame of himself

Mar 17, 2012

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Arnav: come back to his senses, everything falling in place, so jijaji played trick that he and khushi love each other, now i will teach him a lesson.

Arnav: is really very happy to know that khushi loves him, he think i will tell her and apologize when she wake up, but again he thinks no first she has to confess that she loves me, then i will tell her reason behind their marriage.mean while arnav hears anjali calling him chote kaha ho tum. he is not feeling like going down leaving khushi with half hearted he goes down

Anjali: chote tum aur khushi kaha gayab ho gaye ho

Arnav : di woh khushi ko bhaang kuch jyada hi chad gaya tha is liye usko room me sulaya, i hav some work and doing that

Anjali: giggles khushiji bhi na, but she is sweet nice girl. teek hi ab unhe neeche bulakar lao hum unhe neemboo ka achar dethe hai nasha uthar ne keliye

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Mar 17, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha) (Thanked: 56 times)

Arnav: goes to his room and try to wakeup khushi, but she hugs him tightly n keep on saying bathayiyena. he look n lost in her beauty with a smile places a small kiss on her forehead saying pagli

both arnav and khushi comes to living area where all family members gathered already

Anjali: ye lijiye khushiji neembo ka achar

Khushi: hearing that she leaves arnav hand and make face like small kid for achar n start enjoying

Arnav: started admiring her each movement

shyam :notice this and think ab hume patha chal gaya hai saale saab aap ye shaadi kyun ki

Khushi: came back to her senses

Anjali: how are you feeling khushi ji, aap na kabhi bhaang na lijiye, aap ko bhaang peene ke baad itna nasha chad gaya ki arnav ne jabardasthi utakar laye

Khushi: listening this now what this laad governor thinking like that she look at arnav with scared face

Arnav: enjoying her expression, he knows what going on her mind, he leaves to his room

Khushi: also move towards their room to freshup meanwhile

shyam: aap teek hai khushi ji aap ka bhanaya hua bhaang man ke bheethar saare such ugalvathi hi

Khushi she give him a confused look n move towards their room

Arnav: standing infront of mirror n try to remove color on his face, but it wont, he say as usual what the

khushi who come inside room n watching this try to give him cold water to remove gulal

arnav : with fake anger all because of you, why you applied color on me

Khushi: kyaa

Arnav: ha tumne lagayana

Khushi : woh anjaliji ne bola isliye

Arnav : ha tho phir anjalaiji aaakar phir bathana hai kya nikhal ne keliye

Khushi: kyaaaa( with confused expression)

Arnav : ab tumne lagaya tho tumehi Nikhalana padega karo he come forward with ordered tone

Khushi: with out no choice starts wiping the color on his face gently, she is very close to him she can feel his breath

Arnav : also unable to resist rabbave plays back

after somtime

Khushi come back to her senses n moves back, leaves from there aap ye teek nahi kar rahe ho devi mayya hamare saath

Arnav smiles to himself hearing her muttering, n keep on looking the way she left

Mar 18, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha) (Thanked: 45 times)

First of all all , and coming to narrating in english we cant so effectively as we can do in hindi yaar so plssss adjust

Khushi : take bath and come out, she will come and sit in front of mirror n getting ready to go down

arnav : watching her with out her knowledge and think how she beautiful she is

Khushi: aap teek ho kya aap bhi bhaang pee rakhe hai kya

Arnav: what

Khushi : nahi aap teek tho ho

anjali : Khushiji , chote come down for dinner

while they are about to go down they come in one other hands

Arnav : will not leave the chance hold her tightly with one hand on her waist

Khushi : chodiye hum teek hai

Arnav: showing fake anger cant you walk properly

Khushi : hamara chodiye aap dekhke chal sakthe hai na, hamesha koi na koi vajah doond the rehthe hai chillane keliye she will go down saying this

Arnav follows her n come down for dinner

At dining table

Shyam: tries to expose their relation, holi khelthe samay aap dono gayab ho gaye the tho hum doondthe doondthe aap ke kamare me pahunch gaye tho poolside ke paas hume ek toota huwa cloth mila hum jab soche yeah kiska hai tho woh tho aapke blanket phatgayi. aapko tho har cheez perfect chahiye na tho ye kaise hua, poolside par blanket kyon rakha gaya

both arnav and khushi stare at each other

Arnav : woh kya hai na jijaji hamari shaadi hui hai lekin khushi ki bachpana abhi bhi nahi gayi

Khushi : look seriously arnav

Arnav:tho kabhi kabhi raat me taare gin ne lagthi hai, tho meri pyaari si biwi ko tand lag jaye tho isliye mein blanket ood letha hu

Payal: ha hamari khushi taaaron mein uski amma aur babuji ko doond thi hai

Khushi : eyes filled with water when payal says about her lost parents,

Arnav : stands and hold her with his one arm on shoulders and says dekhiye jijaji ruladiya na meri biwi ko, saying this he winked at her

Khushi: look confusingly at arnav is laad governer ko samaj na bahut mushkil hai

Shyam: turns red on seeing his plan flop and seeing khushi in Arnav's arms and leaves the table

Anjali : inki baathon ko bura math maniye khushiji inki peshe ki wajah se aise hi sawal karthe rehthe hai

After that every one retires to their respective rooms to sleep

Khushi n Arnav still standing ther

Khushi: sab log chalegaye ab aap hame chod sakthe hai

Arnav : abhi hum neeche hai tho mein aise kar saktha hu

Khushi : looks at arnav with so many questions in her mind whats wrong with him? nashe ki halath me meine kuch boldiya? ya phir koi aur wajah ho salkthi hai aur shaym ji ke baaton se bhi aise hi lagtha hai ki nashe ki halath me kuch badbadaya? she is muttering to her self

Arnav : ab chalo

Mar 18, 2012

i like story to go this way (By Praneetha) (Thanked: 42 times)

Khushi: finish her bath and come out and sit in front of mirror n she is getting ready to go down

Arnav: she is looking gorgeous oh god how can i resist now onwards

Meanwhile Anjali kushiji aur chote come down for dinner. both try to go down they both hit each other khushi comes in arnav's arms rabbave music starts

Khushi: coming back to senses first moves back from arnav's arms

Arnav : showing fake anger cant you walk properly inside he is really happy that khushi came into his arms

Khushi: hume chodiye aap dekh ke nahi chal sakthe hai kya

Arnav: tum

Khushi will not giv him chance to start again and goes down for dinner

Arnav : follows her

At the dining table

Shyam: saale saab holi ke samay aap dono gayab hogaye tho doondthe doondthe hum aapke kamare tak pahunch gaye, aap dono nahi dikaye diye tho poolside par chalpade, tho waha par hame ek pahti huyi kapda dikha, hume tajoob huyi aap tho har cheez sambhal ke rakhthe hai, tho jab hum woh cheez kya hai dekhne ki koshish kiya tho woh aapki blanket phatgaya, hume ek baat samaj me nahi aayi poolside pe blanket kaise gaya

Both arnav and khushi stare each other

Arnav: immediately woh kya hai na jijaji humari aur khushi ka shaadi tho ho gayi hai leki abhi bhi uska bachpana nahi gayi, when he say like that

Khushi: look at arnav seriously

Arnav: raat ko use taaron ko dekhne ki adath hai, jab hamara pyara biwi tand me ho aur hum uska khyal na rakhe is liye woh blanket hum uspar ood lethe hai

Khushi: look at him confusingly this time, inko kya hogaya

Payal: ha hamari khushi un taroon me apni gujare huye amm aur babuji ko dekhthi hai

khushi: payal ki woh baat sunthe hi khushi ki ankh bhar aathi hai

Arnav : stands n place his arm on her shoudler, kya jijaji ruladiyana mere pyaari biwi ko

shyam : turns red seeing his plan flop and khusi in arnav's arms and leave the table

Anjali: inki baaton ka bura math maaniye

Khushi : smiles its ok Di

every one leaves to their rooms

Khushi is still in arnavs arms ab chodiye sab chale gaye hai

Arnav ha patha hai lekin hum abhi bhi neeche hai

Khushi: turns towards him and rabbave starts

Somany questions in her mind whats wrong with this laad governer, meine nashe ki halath me kuch boltho nahi diya, aur shyam ji ka bathon ka kya , kuch tho gadbad jarroor hai with all these thoughts in her mind she leaves towards their room with arnav

all for encouraging me and supporting me, excuse me if i made any mistake and u ppl hav all rights to correct me

pranee

Mar 18, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha) (Thanked: 45 times)

Arnav : ab cholo

they both reach their room

Arnav: is on the of the world.today he is going to his room with his love n life, he is very happy inside

Kushi: as soon as khushi enters inside move away from his arms and goes towards the bed to take her pillow and blanket

Arnav : freeze for somtime in this happy moment he forgot that he forced khushi to sleep poolside, then all of sudden a thought comes to his mind

Arnav: he calles her name with little anger Khushiiii

Khushi: she stops ther

Arnav : abhi jo neeche hua woh kafi nahi tha , phir se poolside jaa rahe ho

Khushi:Agar hum andar rahe tho apko problem hai, hum bahar soye tho bhi aap ko pareshani hai, ab ye math bolna raat bar bina soye isi kamare me gujaro, humse nahi hoga

Arnav : smiles for her answer inside but he never showed instead he says What the

Arnav: acting anger tumko koi baat seedhi samj nahi aathi hai kya

Khushi: aap ko lagtha hai hume samaj nahi hai, behter hai ki aap hi hame samjayiye

Arnav: teek hai tum is kamare pe sojao

Khushi dhanyawaad aadi neend me man badal ke hame nahi jagayenge na

Arnav : ab chup chap so jao

Khushi: take her mattress na pillow and about to spread on floor

Arnav : yeah kya kar rahe ho, u can sleep here on bed

Khushi: comes near to arnav and ask him aap teek ho

Arnav: :oh yeah thx, ab tumahare vajah se aur pareshani nahi uta saktha hu , koi our option nahi hai bina tume sehne ki

Khushi: devimayya hum aapse na baat karne ka saja is tarah de rahe ho, khushi muttering to herself and come sleeps on the otherside

Arnav: ab bakwaas band karo so jao

both lie down but coudnt sleep

Khushi: lost in her thoughts she is happy for nani, anjali,amma and buaji forgave her. on the otherside shyam's threatening , and this laad governer kya meine bhaang ki nashe me inse kuch boldiya yeh aisa kyon barthav kar rahe hai kushi hardly trying to sleep

Arnav: what she said today , she changed my life with one magical word, i will make her confess soon, and what if she forgive me when she knows the truth why i forced her, and how she met jijaji, he also trying to find answers for few questions. later he noticed khushi is not feeling comfortable on same bed

Arnav; he bends over khushi

Khushi: her heart starts beating faster not knowing what going to happen

Mar 18, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha)

Khushi: he is almost on her, she started sweating and her lips were shivering like anything, she just closed her eyes and holding blanket tightly

Arnav: noticed this he is also in same condition, his heart is beating for her, when he saw her trembling lips he felt like kissing her hardly he control himself, and as usual few strands of hair falls on her face he tries to touch her to adjust that

Khushi: open her eyes notice that he is staring her

Khushi :Yeah aap kya kar rahe ho

Arnav : came out of trance and bends over a bit more that he can touch her body and takes his mobile from her side silently turns to his side and sleep

Khushi: with great difficulty she comes out of that sweet pain, again starts fighting with him abhi aap kya kar rahe the, aap aisa kaisa kar sakthe hai, kya samaj the hai apne aap ko

Arnav : who turned to his side smiling to himself for her questions thinking he is succeeding in his plan to make her confess, and turns to her saying What the

Khushi : what the nahi, hume jawab chahiye

Arnav : kya kiya meine he again comes close to her

Khushi: woh woh aapne abhi

Arnav : mein apana mobile le raha tha what do u thought what iam doing, har waqt kuch na kuch bakwaas soch the ho

Khushi : with angry tone nahi hum jaanthe hai aap jooth bol rahe ho

Arnav : tho sach kya hai tum bathao

Khushi : such ye hai ki aap hume pareshaan karna chathe hai

Arnav : tumhe koi pareshaan karne ki jarroorat nahi hai tumahar dimak hi kafi hai apne aap ko pareshaan karne keliye, har waqt kuch na chaltha rehtha hai,

Khushi : with full swing kay kaha aapne, aap ki kahne se kuch nahi hoga , hume patha hai humne jo mehsoos kiya woh galath nahi ho saktha

Arnav : Agar tum itna achi tarah mehsoos kar sakthi toh is waqt mujse is tarah nahi ladthi

Khushi : kya matlab hai aap ka

Arnav : Ab apni dimak chalana band karo aur chup chap SOjao khushi raat bahuth ho gayi hai

Khushi : ye laad governer aisa kyon bol rahe hai, lekin abhi humne jo mehsoos kiya uska kya, devimayya aap hi samjao hume, saying this she keeps a pillow in between them and fall asleep

Arnav : who lost in her beauty ,silky touch and her trembling lips oh god she is killing how can i control myself all the time , my days are going to be tougher, while thinking all these he wanna see whether she slept or not he is about turn to her side he felt somthing on his back when he turns and see its pillow he says " what the " and smiles looking at her , she is in deep sleep, he removed that pillow n kept other side ans went closer to her,put his hand on her waist

Khushi : comes close to him hugs him and start saying jiji abhi aur lagane dona

Arnav hearing this arnav says pagli and smiles and sleep happily seeing her in his arms

Mar 18, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha)

Next day Morning

Arnav: wake-up first still khushi is sleeping hugging him tightly, and again he is back to his plan he removed his hands on her and close his eyes n sleep again

Khushi: when she got up she notice that she slept whole night hugging arnav immediately she got up and sit aside with jerk

Arnav: who is acting like sleeping waiting for khushi's reaction

Khushi: hey devi mayya agar humse pehle ye laad governer ut jaathe tho tufaan kad kar diye hothe, what the , what the kehke, hume kya ho raha hai, aap hamara saath kyon nahi de rahe ho

Arnav: knowingly arnav turn to khushi's side and hold her waist murmuring khushi

Khushi: becom numb what she had listen just now, and with his touch again her heart start beating faster than her breathe

Arnav : realising the situation again call her name khushi sweetly

Khushi : this time his voice bring tears in her eyes, hum aap ko samajne ki koshish karne se bhi samaj se baahr ho, kabhi itna pyar karthe ho ki aankh bhar aaye, kabhi itna rulathe ho , kya hai jo hume aapse door na jane na de rahi hai, all these she say bit with out her knowldge. and slowly remove his hand n leave to washroom to take bath.

Arnav: ashamed of what he had done to his love. who loves him a lot . she is such a nice girl how can she love me after giving her so much pains. i married her forcefully to save my Di's life and cant see her leaving my life. what ever now i will never allow to fall a single tear from her eyes. he promised to himself. when he lost in his thoughts .

Khushi: come out taking bath. sees arnav lost somwhere she went near to arnav. first hesitate to ask him but later Arnav ji aap teek ho?

Arnav: yeah , come out of his thoughts and look at khushi

she wore green saree, the same one she wore on sangeet night, as she always look beautiful, she sits infront of mirror and start getting ready arnav silently admiring her.

Khushi: arnav ji aap teek hai na she will ask again

Arnav : ha mein teek hu waise bhi tume kya farak padtha hai

Khushi : humne laga aap teek nahi ho, galathi ho gayi humse, hum bhool gaye ki aap Arnav sing Raizada hai aap ki wajah se doosre teek nahi ho sakhthe hai, aap nahi saying this she leaves the room.

Arnav: stares the way she leaved and also went to refresh

shyam: pacing in his room, payal ji ki wajah se aap ne arnav se shaadi ki na khushiji, aap ki marji se nahi, hum aap ka mushkil door kardenge, ab hume hi kuch karna padega

Anjali: chaliye nastha karthe hai

Shyam ; rani saheba aap ko lagtha nahi jarror kuch na kuch wajah hai ki saale saheb ne khushiji se shaadi itni jald bazi me kiye

Anjali: jo kuch bhi hua humne aur baaki sab ne un dono ko maaf kar diya

shyam: i guess there is strong reason behind it, saale sahab shaadi ke khilaf the, aisa ho saktha hai kushiji ne unhe phasaya ya phir kisi dabav me aakar unhone ye shaadi kiya, hume unki madat karni chahiye

Anjali ; aap kama kah pareshan ho rahe hai, hame patha hai ye sab kyon achank hua

shyam : ji

Anjali: hum pehle se hi jaanthe the dono ek doosre se pyaar karthe hai, chote ko ye shaadi aur in rasmo me wishwaas aur interset nahi tha, tho usne jaake mandir me apni pasand ki ladki ke saath shaadi karli, ha ho saktha hai khusuji is shaadi se mana kiya hoga, kyon ki in sab cheezo me bahuth wishwaas hai, lekin aap hamare chote ko tho jaanthe ho , woh kabhi kuch taan letha hai, tho paakar hi chodtha hai

Shyam: turning red thinking why she cant change her mind against those sisters

Anjali: ab ye sab chodiye chaliye naastha karthe hai

Mar 19, 2012

i like story to go this way (By praneetha)

Dining table

Nani , akash , mami, mama,payal, anjali, shyam, khushi and arnav all come for nastha

Arnav : akash mein office ja raha hu tum aa rahe ho na

Aakaash: Ji bhai , He looks at payal she smiles and he leaves

Arnav : looks at khushi but she is busy in cleaning table

Nani , anjali and all other will leave the table

Payal : khushi hum sasuma se pooch ke aathe hai dophar khaane me kya banana hai

Khushi: ji jiji

Shyam : seeing no one around khushi, he come closer to her and tell her hum sach jaan gaye hai khushi ji, aap ke shaadi ke baare me

khushi : aap ko jo samaj na hai smaj lijiye hume aap se koi baat nahi karna hai

Shyam: samaj na nahi khushi ji hume pata hai hum is mushkil se aap ko baahar nikalenge

itne me payal waha pahunchthi hai

Shyam: Payal ji aap ko ek sach bathana hai

Payal: hume aap se koi baat nahi karni hai

Shyam : khushi ji ke baare me

Payal: khushi ke baare me baat karne keliye kuch nahi hai

Khushi : ha jiji hum bhi wahi bol rahe hai

shyam: nahi payal ji khushi aap sab logon ko dokhe me rakh rahi hai

Khushi : unke baaton me math aao, hume achi zindagi milagyi na oh sahan nahi kar pa rahe hai

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