The Challenge.....

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Mar 8, 2012

The Challenge..... (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 5 times)

I thought i'd join in too!...loved everyone else's stories - so here's my story starting from where it was left off today from the office...the challenge has been set!..... Enjoy and comment pls!

ASR was raging "how dare she!" flash back of the water splashing his face comes back to him....

Akash "sorry bhai?... did you need something?"

ASR: "Yes its very important... I need you to urgently meet Mr Sina in London, I have to attend another meeting in Delhi which needs my attendance I Know you'll be able to handle it Akash you've been working hard on it...but I'm sorry Akash, you'll have to leave tonight... the flight goes this evening.... You ok with that?"

Akash looked very glum at the thought of Pyalji being alone.. (sorry pyal now)... which is exactly the reaction ASR expected.

ASR: Look Akash, I know what you're thinking.... Pyalji right?... I know you are worried about mamiji's bartav with her - but this meeting is critical Akash .... "

Arnav walks away from Akash to leave him to ponder on this thought.... ASR knew how to get his way and he was not going to let the Kushi Kumari Gupta get away with this....he smirked, raising his head and had a flashback of her shouting out her name "Kushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizadaaaaa!"..... "Mmm Mrs Raizada,....wait and watch"

Akash walks up to Arnav and says ''bhai.. of course I'll go what time is the flight?...."

ASR:" Good, knew I could count on you" and gives him a short shoulder hug!....

Akash "but...bhai.... Pyalji aur ma?..."

ASR: "I know what you're thinking and you're right - mamiji is still upset with Pyalji .... Are you thinking she should go back to her parents for a few days?.... that's good Akash!.... mamiji will get time to calm down and Payalji can be with her parents so she won't miss you too much!" and gives Akash a rare cheeky smile!

ASR continues to smile and repeats her name in his head..."Khushi Kumari Gupta....Singh Raizada.. 2 hours!"

The scene next moves to Khushi...walking off, drenched still.

"She walks off cursing ASR...Lard Govener! Kya samja hey mujko?!......Khushi Kumari Gupta aj har sawalo ka jawab lekey hi rahigi! (KKG Will get answers to all her questions today!)

....nee to mera name bhi....singh raizada nahi...... and she stops midst her thought, flashing back to his face...him saying this is just a contract wedding 6 month only and you mean nothing to me...

Today I will find out why you've done this to me... all this tamasha,.........then she has a fleeting flashback of him saying that his name is not ASR if she's not back..... and momentary feels scared knowing what he is capable of.... And how he has done nothing but humiliate her again and again....

No. She thinks, not this time, jija ji has promised me,,,I know he loves my jiji... he'll stand by her.. he would never send her back....

1 hour passes....and we see Akash dropping Pyalji to her buaji's house.... He steps in and apologies for his leaving and says he has no wish to be apart from her any longer then he has to and will be back soon..and with his pathetic looks says to her family meri pyalji kya kial rackna...."....

Bauji waves her hands around Akash and says jhitay roho beta...phone us when you reach...

Scene shifts back to ASR..who is pacing up and down his room looking at his watch, ......menacing ASR music is playing in the background...flashback of her throwing water on his face comes back to him and then again of her flicking her wet hair in his face..... the end of his lip curls up into a snarl and the business tycoon ASR raises his head up standing taller says to himself " aj me tujay teri aukand delakay shuroga...." (Today I will show you exactly what class you are".... "kar to au..."..(just come home!" he snigers and walks out of his room bumping straight into Shyam.

Jijaji?.... have you forgotten your way again?..... aren't you abit to close to my room?....and strided down the stairs again....ASR music playing again in the background...!

Khushi's at the mandir and talks to Devi Mayai

"I've got no interest in being here...but you were on the way..thats why I thought I'd quickly update you .... And rejoices in how she told him what for and has told him she's no longer scared of him...he can do what he likes!........she's clasping her hands and says happily to Devi Mayia.... Vah!... you should have seen his face!...anyway what do you care?!.... ok bye....then is about to walk out...then quickly does a prayer and says...It's habbit ok!... its not for you!....and stops and smiles and says in her head "sab theek hojiaga ab...(everything will be ok now...)... and happy dramatic kkg music plays whilst she skips down the stairs of the mandir....biggest smile on her face........

She bounces around the corner from her house and see's Pyal through the window and she's sitting on the bed crying!

Khushi stands there mortified,...... "how can this....how has this..... what have I done?.....he can't do this...."

Should I continue?...

Mar 8, 2012

continued.. (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 4 times)

Khushi is distraught..... omg ji ji......she runs into the house and barges into puaji...."sanka devi!" she shouts..... "phir argi?...... chup chap nikolo.........(get out of here... you've done enough damage and aj to had kardi!......

Khusi thought she was talking about pyalji coming home and thought she meant it was her fault....she wasn't even listening to puaji properly...

The dilemma music was playing and khushi was desperately looking around to try and see pyal her stuff but she kept hearing a mixture of.;

;shanka devi!..nikola"

mera nam hey Arnav Singh Raizada.."

"hai hai naand Kishore!"

"tho kantay! 2 hours!"

"bahut karchagi ho (you've done enough!"

'pyal tumaray khar hogi! (pyal will be back home!"

"hai hai...nikolo!!!"

In a crazy blur khushi virtually swings out of the door twisting round to see Arnav.....

Khusji looks back in a mixture of shock and amazement and momentarily forgets whats she's doing...she's in a trance and Arnav walks upto the stairs and politely to puaji makes a civil gesture to indicate he's taking Khushi home don't worry....

He leads her to to the car...she's still in a trance hearing voices seeing flashbacks... dramatic ah ah ha ha........ah ah ha ah......music is playing....pyal's broken marriage first time...her tears.... The kheer incident....

Before she realises where she is Arnav has stopped the car jerking her into her senses...... she looks at him horrified and then her expression changes from fear to full rage and hatred...... and is desperately trying to get out of the car fiddling with her seatbelt...in which time Arnav has walked round to her side in his jaguar stride opened the door wide clicked her belt off and virtually grabs her out of the car by her shoulders....she stumbles as she comes out and hits her head on the side of the car... she touches her head momentarily and then walks forward towards him....

He doesn't move and she raises her had and starts to say "aap aisa kesay....Arnav ji apka dil...... SHORIAY MUJAY!!" (how can you do this?.... your heart... leave me!!!"

Mar 8, 2012

The Challenge..... (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 5 times)

"Shoria Mujay"!

Arnav has picked her up and is swinging her around... attempting to shut her up and carries her into the house with her kicking her legs the door is opened by shyam.

ASR business man music starts playing again..... khushi stops fighting and we see her hand grabbing ASR's collar tighter inching her body closer without realising...her natural reaction to be away from the snake....

Angali is close behind him and is still angry so doesn't smile but her eyes give her pleasure away shotte is happy....

ASR,,,bursts through the door slyly swinging khusji's legs so Shyam is almost kicked out of the way...not an obvious kick but the viewers get ASR's intention and the symbolism of this act!..

Hi Di.... Sorry.... Meri Biwi (and looks back a little angling at Shyam)...mujsa thori naraz hai.... Because I picked her up too early...so I have to make it up to her!.... and carried her up the stairs.....again ASR music playing loud and clear.....Shyam squirming in anger and angeli just softly shaking her head and walking off...and Nk running in from somewhere with his camcorder in hand.....

Mar 8, 2012

the Challenge..... (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 4 times)

Arnav has picked her up and is swinging her around... attempting to shut her up and carries her into the house with her kicking her legs the door is opened by shyam.

ASR business man music starts playing again..... khushi stops fighting and we see her hand grabbing ASR's collar tighter inching her body closer without realising...her natural reaction to be away from the snake....

Angali is close behind him and is still angry so doesn't smile but her eyes give her pleasure away shotte is happy....

ASR,,,bursts through the door slyly swinging khusji's legs so Shyam is almost kicked out of the way...not an obvious kick but the viewers get ASR's intention and the symbolism of this act!..

Hi Di.... Sorry.... Meri Biwi (and looks back a little angling at Shyam)...mujsa thori naraz hai.... Because I picked her up too early...so I have to make it up to her!.... and carried her up the stairs.....again ASR music playing loud and clear.....Shyam squirming in anger and angeli just softly shaking her head and walking off...and Nk running in from somewhere with his camcorder in hand.....

Mar 8, 2012

the Challenge.... Part 4 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 6 times)

Back to ARSHI.... He has carried her up the stairs in a fierce stride straight into their bedroom.

He finally looks at her (ASR MUSIC AGAIN GUYS!),.... Looks in disgust and throws her onto the bed....

Khushi looks up horrified at him - tears welling in her eyes...quickly fixing the palu of her saree which has swung forwards slightly as she fell to the right....

ASR noticed her adjusting herself and knelt on the bed infront of her. He wanted to see the fear in her face - she had challenged him.... Arnav Singh Raizada,....!

The flashback of her throwing water in his face then walking away from him comes back to him... and his face gets tighter the anger becomes more obvious and he grabs her hand and trows the pallu back over to make his point.

Eyes wide open she moves backwards .... Looking frightened tears streaming down her face...

ASR like a lion about to jump on his pray inches closer so he is now towering above her.... he's arms are either side of her traping her.

Her head is tilted away so he is leaning in closer next to her ear...... and threateningly says "Biwi ho meri....mrs Khusi Kumari Gupta.....Singh Raizeda...... kya karlogi?"

Khushi immediately faces him and flashes him a look of fear..... and then tries to flee off the bed there is a momentary struggle and then Arnav grabs holds her down and grabs her pallu with his hand indicating his power...

Khushi is crying and he realises he went too far - and got up....

"par...tum meri class ki nahi ho!"

khusji in a state of fear and rejection in one foul swoop looks up with fresh tears and shakes her head at him slightly... as if to say I can't believe I ever felt something for you...

He swings back towards her and says " don't ever make this mistake again..... I'm serious. You're here for 6 months now get used to it!"

He walks away and is suddenly forced to stop...

Mar 8, 2012

THE Challenge.... Part 5 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 7 times)

ASR looks down towards his leg as he has stopped mid stride unable to move..

He looks down and sees that Khusi is on the floor holding his leg crying uncontrollably.

"meri jiji ko... arnav jis...ap aisa...muja maff kardiay.... Please,,,arnavji..meri ji-ji ko vopas..."

Arnav looks horrified and flashes a look of guilt mixed with helplessness and looks down at her crying at his feet....his hands waver uncomfortably not knowing what to do ,... how to react in this situation!

"Arnav ji may apke per parti hoo" (touching his feet)..... Arnav lifts her up quickly and she looks completely broken again looking down towards the floor. Arnav is staring at her and says "Khushi don't..." in reaction to her touching his feet... and stares at her in shock and sadness to what he's done....

Raba veh.........haiye..........raba ve..... Rabe ve!....

"Khusi don't do that again...".... He turns away from her scared that he's shown his real emotions on his face...."infact door roh mujsay"....

Khusi "meri ji-ji?"..... sobbing towards him.....she holds her hands up to him in a plea...and he grabs them quickly shaking his head....again turning away from her saying something like "dammit" under his breath.

ASR is back on: " Stop this nonsense now... this was just a trailer she'll be back tomorrow..."

Khusi looks at him and is about to say something and he stops her holding his finger up.

"Stop mujay teri koi bakwas nahi soon-nee........I hope tum mujay samaj-gi ho....murkay aisa natik kia tho...(hope you understand me know..and wont make this mistake agan)..and he takes 1 step towards her as she steps back and then he walks off in different direction.

Leaving khushi with her thoughts and her defeat.

The next Morning it is Holi.....

Ok Tired now...goodnight guys (the time here from London is 12.35am.....lets hope tomorrows episode is not a flipping dream!..... and we have a whole raba ve packed show! love it!!!

Mar 8, 2012

The Challenge....to Holi Part 6 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 8 times)

Holi Morning:

Its Morning time - we get a visual of the White car outside the Raizada mansion.... Sun is out.

Hari Parkash is walking in with trays of colour getting things ready for holi....Angali is walking slowly pointing out instructions to various workers.

Angali " yeah aj sub ke pheli holi hey...sub tiksay hojana chahia"

NK: 'of course DI! This is going to be a rocking holi ka talvaar!"

Angali "tuhaar!" and touches his face lightly then walks away...

NK: 'Yes yes sorry! Tuhaar!,...and I'm going to film it to take you all back with me....!"

Mamiji(Manu!) :"Hello Hi Bye bye...NK bitwa...tumari masiji ko nah pulana...aj mena extra boootiful makeupiay kiaya hey!."

NK" Oh yes yes mamiji....and your saree!...iska koi karab nahi!"

Mamaji quickly corrects him "javaab" and follows his manu!

Mamiji stands there talking to Mamaji and says "why's that koon bari thang coming back so quickly when my Akash bitwa isn't even here ?.....

Mamaji "Manuamaji..sab paas hoingay... acha lagayga....."

Mamiji walks off in a huff and mumbles that it will only be good Holi when she can say "bye bye" to the Gupta parivaar at the end of the day!

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Back upstairs Arnav is sitting on his chair....Khushi is walking in from outsides with her bedding which she is slightly dragging behind her.... Arnav is looking down and his eye catches the edge of the blanket and notices that it is stained with dirt from being outside with a leaf attached to it..... he looks perturbed again..and looks away deep in thought whilst khushi walks into the bathroom or somewhere to get dressed.

He sits there and the dilemma music starts again...

He's clasping his hands and thinking of last night- flashback of him trapping her on the bed ..then her on the floor at his feet... her in front of him her hands adjoined begging him...then the dirt he saw on her blanket just now... "damit her muttered to himself.... Clasping his hands again and then slamming his laptop shut himself he stands up and walks to the poolside door....holding the door slightly.... His eyes looking at the spot where she must has slept.... He turns back into his room angrily at the same time Khushi has come out of the bathroom in her White kurta eyes looking down looking confused and scared...

He looks straight at her...looks at the end of her kurta sleeve and sees the bobbly think he dislikes so much but secretly adores... he's still looking at her....looks at her kurti...she looks so small he's thinking... he looks at her eyes.. there is nothing there but sadness....... She looks up towards him and their eyes meet and he holds her stare....

Raba veh.......

Mar 8, 2012

The Challenge....to Holi Part 7 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 7 times)

Part 7................

She knows that he's looking at her..and she touches her red duppata feeling vunerable infront of him..

Just then there's a knock on the Door and Hari Parkash walks in with a tray and 2 drinks on it.

"Anjaliji neh Chai pheji hai... and said to come down quickly as everyone will be here soon"

Arnav "rakdo.... Hum atay hai" (Put it down - We're coming)

Khushi's standing there nervously still - unsure of what to do he's standing too close to the dressing table and all her things are there...

He takes one step forwards and she steps back automatically...

He wasn't even close to her but he suddenly felt bad that she was physically scared of him..

Arnav : politely says "Khushi... tum tiar hojao...mai neechay jara-hoo (Get dressed I;m going down stairs...)

He walks past her and she looks back at him desperation in her eyes.. "Arnav ji,,, meri ji-ji?"

Arnav: again very softly "vopas ari-hay...sub ke saath... Holi ke liya"

He walks out and she sits down holding her chest grateful that it's all ok her ji-ji is coming back...

Moments later Anjali walks in and says I thought you of all people would have been downstairs today smiling at her for the first time in days... "holi jo hai"...she tells her everyone is coming from her house and that Nani ji wanted everyone to celebrate together.....its just a shame that Akash had to go to London for a few days but he'll be back soon... come downstairs..

Khushi is so relieved a tear drops down her face...she wipes her eyes and says.."bas khusji... aur nahi...Anjali tik kherihai.......aj Holi Hai!...aur mey is lard Governer ko aj holi ka mazza dhikay hi rohoo gi!....(Stop crying Khushi... today I'm going to show that Laard Governer the Joy of holi...the Kushi Kumari Gupta way....Kushi Kumari Gupta..Singh Raizada way!" saying the last bit out louder standing up in a defient fiery self again.... Happy Khushi music jingling in the background...followed by la la la la....la la la la....la la lal la la la la laaaaaaaaaa ?

Mar 9, 2012

The Challenge....to Holi Part 8 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 6 times)

Khushi almost dances downstairs happy that her sister is back and its Holi... forgetting all about the challenge and her plan to get Arnavji to talk....all was forgotten temporarily whilst she virtually skipped to the wall touching the beautiful flower decorations and watching 5 men carry trays of colour....stopping them she pinches some of the red and lets it fall through her fingers and swings round dupata round her neck hair swinging round with her as she looks at flower decorations from beneath! "Holi!!!" she clenches her fists in excitement and is about to run off when NK stops her..

NK "Hey hey Khushi ji...I mean bhabhi ji!.... Happy Holi yah?!.... now tell me bhabi ji...what your favourite thing about holi?" holding his camera up and filming her....

"NK-JI!...Kya bataoo mey!.." dancing round... yeh rang..yeh ronak yeh masti ..garam garam jelibiay...wah!.....nk-ji aj ap lucko wali ki Holi deklo! !..

Mamiji " Hello hi bye bye!... yeah tumara Gupta house nahi hey!.... we celebrate top stylish here!,... you wait and watch miss phati saree... phreee bauhooraneee! raizada holi ka kamaal!...".....and she walks off,,,after doing a turn of her saree and her flowers in her hair for the camera.... And to herself finishes her sentence...."holi ka kamaal aur thora baang ke nashaa!!..." giggling and walks off!....

Mar 9, 2012

The Challenge....to Holi Part 9 (By Sharon_M) (Thanked: 7 times)

Part 9

Everyone is outside and the Gupta perivaar are greeted... ...

Angeli finshes her prayer evetyone is behind her including Arnav standing next to shyam and she gives everyone a tikka to start the holi celebrations and turns to Khusi and Pyal standing together and says I hope your first Holi in this house is a memorable one....

"Oh yes!! Says NK from behind the camera!.....thora nach hojai??,...

and surprise surprise mamaji from behind a massive pot of pang starts singing that famous song...... raang basra.....bhigi......choonariay....... towards mami ji!

She fakes a little embarrassment and they both do a filmy dance to the song!.....

in the meantime the baang drinks in the background are switched by Syam... who is plotting some plan in his head... looking at khushi dancing in the colours and swaying her chooni and dancing she is sitting down next to her father....

Arnav is also watching her and catches the look in her face...and almost smiles then frowns into confusion and walks off... he talks to a few people and says you please enjoy yourself " muja thora kaam hey..."

He is about to walk off when........just like that....Khushi slips on some slushy colour on the floor and bumps into him with a huge tray of color and is about to fall back ... tray on the floor....colour all over them.....a tight ASR hand holding her hand in that signature pose we all love....(bit of mihir and tulsi-ness about it) but its our favourite couple.....

Raba ve........hai..........raba vai.... Music lasts for ages...we all feel happier and love the directors of this show!

Anjali walks over and interrupts them "paheli holi Mubarak shotte..."

Arnav is happy- first time in days that she has looked at him properly...

"Thanks Di...."

Nk comes over..."hey hey...whats this..happy couple... come on say something in the camera for us!"...

Arnav looks at Khushi and for the benefit of the camera and his sister, grabs khushi's face putting colour all over her nose and cheeks.... "Happy 1st holi mrs Arnav Singh Razizada!" and gives her a cheeky smile and walks off!

NK and Angali both walk off! Khushi is furious! Shaking her head slightly seeing her face in the outdoor mirror (it was just there of course!!)

Blowing her fringe out of her way..she mockingly rolls up her sleeves and grabs the drink that has been sent to her from Syam.... The baang....

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