YOU ARE A KILLER...

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Jun 8, 2015

YOU ARE A KILLER... (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 47 times)


girls it is 75% real and 25% imagination story..

happenings are real and feelings are imagined by me...

we cant understand others feelings right..

i am sry dilu akka and others i am going to use ur names because idont know whose name to use...

*holding my ears* sry again..

pls support me... all plus and mines commands are welcome ..

love u guys...


prologue:...

a whats app chat between khushi and dilu...

khushi: hey davimaya!!! u broke up with jiju..!!


dilu: han khushi..*sadly*


khushi: but y akka???


dilu: my parents found it out... they dont like it.. he is my bestfriend.. i said to him about it... he too understood..


khushi: but still u love him a lot..


dilu: yes i do.. butwat to do...


khushi: i am saying it once again akka.. do what ur heart says...


dilu: i am doing what my heart says only.. ok! now change the topic?


khushi:i dont think u r listening to ur heart.....

dilu: i dont know wat is right or wrong.. but i am doing this for my familywho strugled a lot for me...

khushi: ok! i agree but think about it after some years too .. u have mush time....


dilu: ok baba... now answer my question


khushi: wat question???


dilu: u wont take me wrong na...!!!


khushi: when i took u wrong akka...


dilu: ok..does arnav have any girlfriend?


khushi: y akka.. asking it suddenly??


dilu: dont take me wrong.. from all ur former chats i think u like arnav..


khushi: no. this cant happen.. he is my bhabis brother.. wat will she think about me!!


dilu: she wont think anything..


khushi: but still no.. my families reputation is important to me...


dilu: i am proud of u dear.. u r thinking about ur families reputation..


khushi: me too proud of u akka...


dilu: but still think about it once..


khushi: happy nit akka... its already 11.40.. u have to attant ur class tomorrow... go and sleep..


dilu: ok dear good nit..


........................conversatation ended........................



khushi:*talking to herself seeing the midnit sky* NO THIS CANT HAPPEN... I AM ALWAYS A KILLER AND REMAIN THE SAME......


in my story all the characters are from south India... but names remain the same..



SHOULD I CONTINUE DEARS???



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Jun 11, 2015

chapter 1:- (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 36 times)

chapter 1:-

before almost a month from this conversation........................


a gang of gangster is walking with full of anger in their eyes.....


chinna: we shouldn't leave him khushi.... how dare he play with us....


aaru: yes.... we should show him what we are and what we can do...


nk: guys.... calm down... its just an misunderstanding.....*then whispered in khushis ears* khushi ji.. don't hear what they say... they will always put themselves and others in some problems... we better go back to home....


guna: *heard nk whisper to khushi* how dare u say like this... *turning to khushi* khush u must teach him a good lesson or else i wont marry u.... remember....


chinna: guna don't worry khushi will do something to him...


now they reached their destination....


khushi: yes guna darling.... we will marry for sure... i will teach him not good but best lesson....


saying this she tied a rope on a tree near the path and went to another side of path.....


aaru: khushi this is old idea... we can think something new..


khushi: no aaru... old is always gold... this will workout... u guys just do as i said...


they five sit under a shaddy big tree which hide them from the path....


nk: is it nessesary to teach him a lesson...???


all four: yes... it is.....


nk: *accepted defectedly* ok.....


there came their enemy manigandan.... they all sat in their position.... they kept their eyes on him making sure he don't escape... when he neared them.. khushi pulled the robe.... he stumbled on the robe and fell down in which his wig too fell on the sandy road...


chinna ruched to the place as if gonea help him... but he lifted that man's precisious wig and thrown it to khushi which she catched with all difficulty *she is not a good catcher*


********** flashback*******


before some hours.....

nk and khushi helped khushis cousin brother shyam and his to be wife anjali to meet in some secret place... nk is anjalis cousin brother...

when the couple were talking these two stood together... that time this man manigandan*around late 50"s* saw them and misunderstood them as lovers and said it to nks parents... when they enquired about it to nk he said the truth....

***********flashback ends*********

 he got up and stood stright


khushi: how dare u... u said we are lovers!!! 


mani: whats wrong in it???


khushi:*to nk* look u said not to punish him... HIM!! look what he says..


nk:*became anger* how dare u say like this.. * to khushi* khushi give that wig to me i will burn it down...


mani: pls dont do that...


khushi: what u thought.. u will say all sorts of nonsence and we will keep quiet?? NEVER.. 


mani: i know girls like u form city will never know how to behave with elders..


nk: *pushed him down* how dare u...


chinna, guna and aaru start to beat him... the most powerful punches are guna's.... he is so possessive about khushi....


khushi: guys stop it... * turning to him* wat u know about me... he is my bhabis brother means my brother.... how can u talk me with my brother...!!


guna: no need to give him explaination khush.. give that wig to me... i will burn it down...* he snached it from khushi*


chinna: no i will burn it down...


aaru: guys why are u hell bend to burn it down.... is it that beautiful?? it is already looking like burned one...* she got it from guna and gave to khushi*


khushi: look... this is final warning to u... if u do anything like this again... i will tell this wigg matter to all...* she throw it to mani*


mani:*whispered to himself running from that place* i wish i could stich this one with my head...


aaru: everything ok now khushi... thank god he said it to nks parents.. if he said it to ur parents.. then its the final day for u...


guna: no one dare to harm my khush... even her parents....


khushi: ho my dear darling... ok guys.. now lets rush to home... mom will be searching for me...


all were running to the house... on the way rain poured and made them wet...

all reached home fully dranched in rain..

khushi's mom came and scolded her for geting wet in rain...


garima: (khushis mom) * after shouting her* why are u always playing with ur brothers kids.. u r a grown up girl now... better behave as a grown up... they have parents to take care of them.. why are u running behind them....(chinna, aaru@aarathana are khushis first brother maan and geets kids)


khushi: mom i have never said a no to u... but think once.. they have parents but they love me more then their own parents mom.. they cant be without me...

that time guna entered...

guna: yeah mami.... i love khushi a lot.. more then my parents...*he said hugging khushi from behind and kissed her on cheeks...


khushi: hww... dear... i too love u....


garima: u both na... dont know what u have in ur head... romancing before me...* she said and hit guna's head playfully*


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Jul 2, 2015

chapter 2: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 29 times)

Chapter 2:


 Guna: mami... Its u who is seeing us... Don't u know I am going to marry khushi.


 Garima: so... So what!!!???? U will kiss my daughter before me?? *she asked with smile*


 Guna: yes I can kiss her... *he said as if its worlds fact*


 Garima: who said it to u that u r going to marry her so u can kiss her?? *she asked with raised eyebrows*.


 Guna: i know it... Dad kissed mom... when I asked him he said she is his wife and he have all rights over her (whispers in khushis ears) for which mom beat him... *both khushi and guna giggled for it*


Khushi: see ma... I have already told them not to romance before this devil.... But when they heard me... *she said sarcastically and loudly so that gunas parents who are in room near them can hear her


. Garima: see they have spoiled this little 7 year old child with there shameless act *she said equally loud*


 Maan: who this devil is little boy??He can understand all things and he wants marry our khushi when he is not even height of her hip..And u guys r telling he is an child... He is a devil... Khushi be away from him.... He may even kidnap u.


 Guna: stop it dad... Y should I kidnap khushi... And if i kidnap her how will i get the dowery...


 Maan, garima and khushi: dowry???* shouted so that feet got up*


 Guna: said casually * yes... Its one of our tradition na??????*before they could say anything geet came there*


Geet: won't u guys let me sleep..... Y u all shout like earthquake came..... And maan ate u still here... Get me a mango......


 Maan: geet .... Y u woke up... U r pregnant... U should rest.. And don't eat too much mango dear......*he said caringly*..... .


 Geet: how long should I sleep... U go and get me a raw mango..... Now... Or else I will eat u.... No..I will eat sugar...............


 Maan: u r tretning me.. *seeing her glare* ok.. OK... I will go.. U take rest..*he goes to get some mangos for her*..............


 Garima: how are u feeling geet dear... How is ur morning sick now a days…...


 Geet: nice ma... I am perfectly fine.. Just this morning sickness is not leaving me still.....


 Khushi: bhabi... U r making bhai to dance to ur tunes... Ummah... Love u.. *she kissed her cheeks huging her*.


 Garima: OK enough khushi... Go and pack ur bags... We r leaving to chennai.... Soon...


*Khushis face turned sad.... She wish to be here for little longer.... But she have to leave.. Its her mothers order... She leaves her bhabi and mother and goes to pack the bags....She went and started packing hers and aarus bag... from childhood aaru is growen up by garima and khushi.... That little 10 year old kid understand her better then anyone... After her mom gave birth to her... She died after some days because of some problems in operation... After that she is here with khushi... Her father is in Singapore to earn for her future. . . aaru came in and started talking too khushi... Or too say... Started her lectures..........


 Aaru: khush packing our bags???.


 Khushi: yes aaru....


 Aaru: I know u wish too stay for few more days*straight face*


Khushi: so...????????…


 Aaru: y don't u say it to choti nani...... Why u always hide ur wishes and listens to them....(garima is choti nani for aaru)...


 Khushi: but aaru!!!!!! we have to leave one day... Y not today then????*raising one eyebrow* ...


 Aaru: khushi... U have to voice out ur wishes.. Or else it won't come true...( before she continue)....


Khushi: stop it dear.... Mom will do everything for our good only... Just go and get ready (she some how pushed aaru out and locked the room before she say anything signing relief*


Outside aaru: I will one day for sure make u listen to ur heart.. Or else I will find a person who will push u to listen to ur heart leaving no other choice for u... And its promise on DEVI MAYA whom u love and worship....


 Will continue... .. . .... Sry guys... College opened... And my brothers dear lappy got broken... So can't update... I updated with such a difficulty through mobile... Pls command or press thank you button.... Thanks for readers who commanded and pressed thank you button.... A special thanks to tparviz... Who missed me.... And also others who commanded to my story and encourageing me.... Thank you dears... Love u .....


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Jul 3, 2015

character sketch.... (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 20 times)

Character sketch:

 Gone a mention their real name in bracket except leads

 

Khushi: she is main lead female of this story…. She is innocent and naughty girl…. She is doing her BA English lit second year…. She loves her cousins and own siblings equally…. Princess of family… all still treats her like small child… she will never say no to her mother’s words…. She will never consider her wish and happiness… all she care is her family and her surroundings happiness…. She always think about her bua who died in an accident… she follows her bua’s words that “u r meant to make others happy… and u have to make sure ur surroundings are happy…. Because spreading happiness is the most inexpensive good thing we can do”…. She lives in Chennai with her family of five members named garima, shashi, payal, aaru and aarav…

 

Garima (Indira): she is khushi and aarav’s mother and she is an house wife… she has struggled a lot in her young age… so she don’t Want her daughter to suffer the same… she still think that khushi is not mature enough to take her own decision… she will only select her dress and accessories too… she never things about khushi’s wish because she always wants best for her daughter which she things her daughter wont choose…

 

Shashi (selvaraj): khushi and aarav’s father… working in an hotel as an manager… he too things best for his daughter not what she wishes… he always controls her from going out of home… except to college…. If she had to go then he will send one of his trusties or her cousins with her…

 

Payal (rathika): she is garima’s younger sister’s daughter… she is considered as bad omen because her parents, her own elder sister and her younger brother died in an accident in which khushi’s bua too dies…. They think it’s because of her horoscope they all died… garima lets her in her house and did all her duties but love??? Only khushi loved her… then aaru and aarav loved her… so she always follows khushi’s path…. Going to complete her 12th std… and she is going to join BA English just like khushi…

 

Aaru (aarathana): Aaru … her full name is aarathana… she is 8 year old girl but thinks maturely…she is daughter of shashi’s younger brother… her mother died when she has given birth to her… her father left her in shashi’s house and left it Singapore  to earn money.. He comes once in a year to see her... she loves khushi a lot and always wish to fulfill her wish which she can’t do because she is still a child… she always tries to make khushi understand that her own wish is also important which khushi thinks as ‘lectures’….

 

Aarav (siva): he is khushi’s own brother… he is naughty and many times annoys khushi which is his time pass… but that doesn’t mean he hate her… her loves her so much that he always wish for her happiness… but pity fellow can’t understand what can make her happy…. He likes aaru and payal too but not more than khushi… for him his sister is his first and best friend… for any problem he will go to her. She will surely have some solution…

 

Guna (gunaselan): cute 8 year old boy geet and maan… loves khushi a lot...he is very possessive about khushi…  he will be always saying that he is going to marry khushi… and khushi too will say that she too will marry him.. *for fun*

 

Maan (anand) and Geet (ratha): khushi’s elder cousin brother and sister-in-law… love her lot… geet is pregnant now….

 

Shyam (dharma lingam): he is Maan’s younger brother and khushi’s cousin brother… a lawyer… loves anjali and going to marry her…. Like to annoy khushi… but loves her too.. ….

 

Mathu (sita) and rakesh (mangudi): Shyam and Maan’s parents….

 

Chotu (kannan): khushi’s village house neighbor kid… 12 years old...



tomorrow i will update arnav and his family...

 


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Jul 5, 2015

character sketch part 2: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 16 times)

Character sketch:  



Arnav:  he is main lead male... He is working as software engineer in Bangalore with very good salary * shouldn’t ask a man his salary**wink*… his sister Anjali (his second mother like figure) and his father adhavan are his only world… he have some friends one among them is aakash… his mother died before 3 years… from then he stopped singing… he is most handsome man… but don’t like girls drool over him… because he is fed up with those types of girls…



Anjali (revathi): she is such a sweet heart… loves shyam a lot and going to marry him…. She love her brother a lot and she is like a mother to him after their death… always wants his happiness… she stayed in their village itself… in their house… because she love to stay there



Aajith (Poovalan): he is an nice and strong hearted man… loves both his son and daughter a lot… he stays a month in Bangalore with arnav and another month in village with anjali… because he don’t want to miss his children and at the same time don’t want to spoil their wish too…he loves his wife aparna (pomathi) so much… who died before 3 years….



Aakash (atul): Arnav’s friend love to tease him… never visited village… he won’t come now… after anjali’s marriage he will be in our story…





NK (Krishna): one of anjali’s cousin brothers…Always tries to be calm… but when he loses temper… that’s it… * u may have known it in that wig chapter*  likes khushi a lot… he thinks her like his sister and the same goes with her…



Sheetal (Tamil arasi): Likes arnav and wish to marry him… she is a beautiful girl in that village… but she shows her attitude as if she is the only beautiful girl there…she doesn’t love him... He is the only fellow who gets his salary in lakhs so... *I think u guys understand*



A small description about the village: it is not some typical straight village… but when it comes to love issue…it is a very straight village… no love marriage can happen their… love is considered as sin… if someone help other in love issue they will be left hungry in a room for 3 days and nights… if someone ran  away or helped to run away then they will be tied around a tree and their feet will be burned using red hot iron rod… so many will not love… if by mistake they fell in love they will try to turn it life arranged marriage… or they will run away to some most faraway place… where they can’t find them….



More characters will be introduced if needed….


and friends.... 1 person is asking to stop my story in every update.... i wish to know who it is ans the reason for stoping my story.... dont miss understand me... its just in curiosity... u all know na... curiosity kills us... ha ha ha... love u guys....

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Jul 5, 2015

chapter 3: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 20 times)



Chapter 3:

 

After packing their bags.... Khushi, aaru, garima (khushi's mother),shashi (khushi's father), payal (khushi's younger sister, her chachis daughter) and aarav (khushi's own younger brother)... Came to chennai.... After biting bye to everyone...

 

 

In chennai... As usual life started...khushi goes to college ... Aaru, payal and aarav goes to school... Shashi goes to work... Garima managing home...

 

*khushi is doing second year in BA English lit....

 

Payal who always follow her sister’s path is in 12th std.... Want to do BA English as her sister...

 

Aaru is in 4th std and aarav is 8th std...

 

Shashi is a small hotel ka manager*

 

There life went smooth like...garima always trusts whatever others say and never trusts khushi's decision... Because she things khushi is still a small child who don’t know what is right and wrong.....

 

Khushi always listens to whatever her parents say without considering about her wish...  Payal follows her blindly... As if khushi is her only light in her dark life (payal has a tragic past which I will say later).....

 

Aaru always tries to teach the importance of her own wish to khushi in which she always fails....

 

And aarav... Being a naughty boy... Always tries to know others secrets....

 

 

Life was very smooth for more than 4 months... for khushi her 4th semester nears... and for payal her public exam nears....Being bright students both studied well and prepared for exams before a month....

 

That's when her cousin brother shyam's marriage got fixed with anjali... Who is a so sweet woman.... All liked anjali.... It's arranged marriage.... And marriage will be held in 20th of May......

 

It is good news which spread in full family... But poor khushi don't know this marriage is going to change her whole life.... Don't know it’s for good or bad...

 

Teaser for upcoming update....

 

Khushi: u better leave me or else....

 

Man: or else what will u do *holding her hands*

 

Khushi: I will do something... Now leave me....*she pleaded*

 

Man: never... U have to come with me... And that is final....

 

*he lifted her took her to his car she was struggling in his grip.... Someone opened the car door and he throws her into the car where she ends up in landing in someone's lap....*

 

Thank you for all who read it and command... And press thank you button... Do command in this update too..... All positive and negative commands are welcome.... Thank you...

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Jul 6, 2015

chapter 4: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 18 times)

Chapter 4:

 

Khushi is preparing for her forth semester which is going to be held after 15 days…. Garima is in kitchen cleaning utensils…

 

Aaru, payal and aarav are too preparing for their exams…

 

It is study holiday for payal and khushi… because of that aaru and aarav took leave stating that they are going to study with khushi and payal….

 

Aarav: khush I am feeling sleepy…

 

Aaru: what!! It’s only 30 minutes passed when u started to study… now u r feeling sleepy???

 

Khushi: yes aarav… this is not good... u have to study… or else… I will send u to school tomorrow…

 

Payal: but akka… we are studying for more than 4 hours… at least we need rest…

 

Khushi: ok dear we take rest *closing her book*… u studied for too long continuously…

 

Aarav: then I will also take rest… *saying this he rushed out before others could say anything*

 

Khushi: *shouted* AARAV… * but he is gone* see this boy… * then turning to aaru* aaru… u too take some rest…

 

Aaru: it’s of khush I will study...

 

Khushi: I said na... come on close it * saying this she took aaru’s book and closed it*

 

Aarav: *shouted * see who Is coming..

 

They turned to see shyam who is smiling at them… all three where very happy they went and hugged him… Garima too came… he gave wedding invitation to Garima… stayed for some... 3 hours... when going he said….

 

Shyam: khushi, payal, aaru and aarav pack ur bags for a day… we are going to village for a special party given by me…

 

All three shouted: Yippieee… PARTY… except one…KHUSHI…..

 

Khushi: No I am not going to come… I have exams… *all three faced became dull*

 

Shyam: Ho… is it!!! *raising an eyebrow*

 

He took all three into an room… after which seems like 10 minutes all came out grinning ear to ear which shown some danger signal to khushi..

Shyam went to garima and asked her permission to take all four… garima who trust him life her son said ok… she said to lock door while going because she have some work outside so she is going…

Suddenly all four came and surrounded her…

 

Khushi: what are u guys going to do…. *she asked with fear*

 

Payal: sorry akka… I am their side now…

 

She showed the fully packed bag and went out and sat in the car which came just some minutes ago… suddenly she remembered something and said…

 

Khushi: Pls leave me bhai… I have to study…

 

Shyam: sorry dear no way…

 

She pushed him and ran to room and tried to lock it but shyam is too fast… he came in… so she ran around the room and at last feeling tired… she lye on her single bed facing it… she holding both end of the bed hugging it life her life depends on it

 

Khushi: no… no… no… I won’t come…. I won’t come leaving my bed… she said as if she is some 5 year old kid refusing to give the teddy…

 

Shyam: Khushi… don’t create a drama… or else I will lift u with the bed itself…

 

She sat on bed straight as if challenging him….

 

Khushi: lift my bed if u can…

 

Shyam: don’t change the topic u drama buzz… come along with me… or else….

 

Khushi: u better leave me or else....

 

Shyam: or else what will u do *holding her hands*

 

Khushi: I will do something... Now leave me....*she pleaded*

 

Shyam: never... U have to come with me... And that is final....

 

*he lifted her took her to his car she was struggling in his grip.... Someone opened the car door and he throws her into the car where she ends up in landing in someone's lap....*

 

Maan: Ouch… wont u come when he calls u... now see... He thrown u on me and broke my pity leg * he said pushing her to seat and caressing him lap as if it’s broken*

 

Khushi: Maan bhai!! How come u r here???

 

Maan: I came flying*sarcastically* what sort of question is this khushi… this stupid brother of mine… thrown me in as he thrown u…

 

Khushi: how…

 

Maan: he said he is going to organize a party... I said ok... he said I also have to come for which I refused because of some important project in company… u know what he did??*looking at khushi’s questioning eyes continued* he came to my company… told to my boss that we have a bald uncle just like him who is killed by his employee because he didn’t give leave so he came here to ask leave for me to do funeral… pity man.. He started sweating and gave leave immediately…

 

By now aaru, aarav, payal and khushi are laughing like hell… their journey started… this journey which is going to change everyone’s life…

 

Teaser for upcoming update:

 

She was just roaming here and there when she saw and heard something which makes her say ‘WHAT THE HELL’ loudly gaining their attention…

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She heard someone saying ‘YOU ARE A KILLER’… she turned around to teach him a best lesson only to be frozen seeing a pair of melted chocolate eyes collide at her jet black eyes…

 

Thank you all my dear friends for reading it patiently and for commanding and clicking thank you button… love u all guys…. Pls do command for this post too….and I already said… curiosity kills me… Pls dear… who are u dear… who is asking me to stop my story in every post… I just wish to know u *innocent* … no offence dear promise *pinching my throat* bye… thank you all my sisters, friends and loves…

 and this update is for my dear priyanjali... are u happy dear?? do command if u r happy....

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Jul 7, 2015

chapter 5: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 19 times)

Chapter 5:

 

With little talk and much sleep at last they reached their village after long tired 6 hours travel… even after driving so fast….

 

They all got down and went inside their house to be welcomed by the caretaker of that home… they went inside and slept for some good hours… after getting up... Maan (Geet didn’t come due to her pregnancy), khushi, payal, aaru and aarav gets ready for party… then only they noticed that shyam is missing… after searching him in every corner of house(even wardrobe) they didn’t find him… so Maan tried to contact him through mobile… after 2 full ring he picked up…

 

Shyam: what the hell… didn’t u guys come here still…? I am waiting for u all… u better come within 10 minutes… party is going to start… come soon…

 

Shyam liberally shouted over phone to maan and cut the call giving no time for maan to talk….Maan’s reaction was like… ‘Is he elder brother or am I??’ when others asked about it… he said that its time to party we have to reach there soon…he didn’t say to them about shyam’s order because if these monkeys come to know then they will kill him by their shouts… he doesn’t want to spoil shyam day today…

They reached party:

 

Shyam:*murmuring to himself in tension* ho god what have I done… I ordered them…ORDERED… for sure they all gone a shout at me…

 

They all found shyam and marched towards him… shyam gulped in fear…

 

Shyam: God I am dead*to himself*

 

Khushi: how dare u bhai!!!

 

Shyam: *feeling like fainting**dramatically* ahh….What I did???

 

Payal: then what bhai… u didn’t informed us that u r coming here… we were searching for u the whole house….

 

Shyam saw Maan whose eyes says ‘u r escaped now but not all the time’ signing relief he said that he have some work here so came here… after sometime guests started arriving… party was on full swing… everyone are enjoying… shyam brought a beautiful woman in lemon yellow saree before all the guests… they came hand in hand which proves them that it is his fiancé… he came before all and introduced her as his fiancé anjali… everyone liked her at instant because of her soft heart and simple nature… especially khushi… it is party only for youngsters so no old people…

 

While everyone are enjoying the party khushi felt bore… so she started roaming in the lonely place in garden near party area… she was whistling, touching and playing with plants and roaming randomly… just then she saw her brother shyam in that place with anjali… there is no one there… she tried to hear their conversation so went near them only to get shock…

 

Shyam: I love u anjali…*holding her by shoulder* I love u so much… I love u for past 7 years… from the day u came to my grandfather’s funeral… I fell in love with u instantly… here love marriage is next to impossible so I buried my love for u… I can’t even imagine another girl in ur place so I rejected many girls… now see fate itself made our parents meet and paired us up…. I don’t want to marry u without telling u about my love… so I told u this… I know I am not like those romantic guys who comes in movies… but I love u and will keep u happy… will u marry me???

 

Anjali:*with happy tears hugged him tightly* I too love u shyam ji … I too love u for past 7 years… u always fight with me so I thought u don’t like me and didn’t say my love for u… I will marry u… I love u…

 

Khushi who heard this was like ‘what the hell’ which she mistakenly said aloud… she think… “What they both love each other for past 7 years and didn’t care to tell it to me…”

 

Khushi:  ‘WHAT THE HELL’ loudly gaining their attention…

Both shyam and anjali came out of their la la la land and landed of earth… anjali felt shy and ran away from there... Shyam tried to say something but luckily his phone started to ring… he excused and went from there…

 

Khushi felt like laughing seeing her brother’s blushing face but when she heard someone saying ‘WHAT THE!! YOU ARE A KILLER’… she turned around to teach him a best lesson only to be frozen seeing a pair of melted chocolate eyes collide at her black eyes…

 

Teaser for upcoming update…

 

Khushi gets so angry with his words that she poured whole glass of juice on him making him utter ‘what the’…

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Khushi: don’t think u are the only handsome man in this world… and I won’t marry u because I don’t like u….

 

Gone a introduce the villain of this story…

 

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Jul 14, 2015

chapter 6: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 18 times)

Chapter 6:

 

Man: You are a killer…

 

Khushi thought who the hell is he… how dare he call me ‘THE KILLER’… I won’t leave him… (Poor!! she don’t know she can’t leave him never in future)

 

She turned around to teach him a best lesson only to be frozen seeing a pair of melted chocolate eyes collide at her black eyes…

Both didn’t blinked for some time…

Their eyes didn’t leave each other… they never wish to too… but they had to…

A glass shattering sound brought them to earth…

They both looked towards the side from where the sound came only to see Sheetal standing there looking at them with question in her eyes…

He saw Sheetal once and again turned towards khushi admiring her…

 

**************Before some minutes***************

 

He was talking with one of his friend in the party…. Suddenly he saw a red figure in corner of his eyes… he turn to see her… but only to see her backpose… don’t know why but he suddenly got an urge to see her face…

He saw her walking to some lonely place and followed her…

He himself don’t know why he is following her… but first time in his life (HISTORY) Arnav Singh Raizada is following a girl which he himself didn’t feel still…

 

He saw her touching the leaves and flowers with her soft fingers… making him to wish why don’t he be that flower…

 

She kissed a white hibiscus flower making him close his eyes in frustration (jealous)

 

Atleast she stood in a place without walking or running or jumping… he went near to talk to her only to hear his only sister’s love confession…

 

He always loved his sister like a mother.. he always wish for his sister’s happiness ( typical ASR)…

 

But what he heard is unexpected… “What the hell” ….!!!!

 

What the ‘WHAT THE HELL’ …. He thought…. Don’t MY ANGEL like my sister to be happy… is she going to tell about this love issue to village authorities…

 

Anger rised in him, making him say “YOU ARE A KILLER”…

 

He was all ready to bash her with hurtful words … but when she turned around his breath got hitched in his throut… only one thing came to his mind.. ‘BEAUTIFUL’ …

 

And her jet black eyes… wow… e never in his life saw such an dark yet glories place in this whole world…

 

Thank you guys… for reading and commanding… do read it and command… all positive and negative commands are welcome…

 

Sorry guys got cot with loads of work and guests came to my house because of which I didn’t even touch mobile or computer… I said lie that I am typing a important project and done this…

 

Teaser:-

 

Same one….

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Oct 11, 2015

chapter 7: (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 16 times)

Their eyes didn’t leave each other… they never wish to too… but they had to… A glass shattering sound brought them to earth… They both looked towards the side from where the sound came only to see Sheetal standing there looking at them with question in her eyes… He saw Sheetal once and again turned towards khushi admiring her… Khushi came out of la la la land hearing the glass shattering sound which Sheetal dropped intentionally to gain their attention …(actually she done it in jealousy)… Sheetal came near to them and asked arnav “Arnav dear!!! Is she creating any problem” Arnav: Nothing!! Just get out of my way (saying this he went from there in anger) After arnav went Sheetal turned to khushi to insult her... but before she can say anything khushi just hit Sheetal’s shoulder with hers and went past her… smiling to herself…naughtyly... Arnav saw this and smiled to himself… He went to his sister to say about this unknown girl who heard about his sister’s conversation with her fiancé… But when he said about this to anjali she just laughed and said… Anjali: No choti… Don’t think like that about her… she is such a soul… infact she already know that we both love eachother … poor girl.. just got shock knowing we love for last 7 years… (Turning to shyam) Hay na shyam ji… (for which he just hmm..ed) After that he was just searching for that unknown girl(For him) … but alas… again he saw her in odd situation… When Khushi is so hell bend in cursing him... She don't know where she land up.... But when she looked up... She was so shocked to even react... She saw a couple kissing each other.... She don't even notice arnav who is just behind her... She was about to gasp when he covered her mouth and took her away from that place... He covered her mouth with his palm and took her out of that place... She was so shocked to even struggle in his hold... He took her to some corner where none can see her... He made her lean on wall still covering her mouth... Leaning on her... Their eyes met.... he said... "Hai I am arnav" Seeing her not answering he asked... "Your name??" She didn't answer but showing actions through her eyes... Then only he realized he is still covering her mouth... The took his hands away and let her breath... After taking an long breath she said.... "Khushi... I am Khushi" "Ho... Ok!!" "Y u covered my mouth???" "If I didn't then u would have killed their romantic moment..." "Killing??!" "Yes!!! Killing.... You are a killer"

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