OS - " Will carry U forever Khushi...BUT NOT NOW"

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Jun 4, 2015

OS - " Will carry U forever Khushi...BUT NOT NOW" (By Vsahi) (Thanked: 90 times)

   Hey dears!! I have written an os for Tainar Di's competition..I have selected the fourth image.. I hope u all like it




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My banner and story:


“ARNAVJI!! COME HERE SOON..”

“KHUSHI!! WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED???”

“Arnavji! See here? How the hero pushing the heroine in that wheelbarrow? Its so cute. I too want a ride in wheelbarrow. Take me na Arnavji?”

“KHUSHI!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT I WENT THROUGH? I WAS IN AN IMPORTANT CALL. I LEFT IT IN MIDDLE AND FOR GOD SAKE!! YOU ARE 3 MONTHS PREGNANT AND I WAS RUNNING HERE, FEARING THAT SOMETHING HAD HAPPENED TO YOU. YES!! NOW START YOUR DRAMA AND CRY.”

“Leave my arm Arnavji!! *sniff*sniff* You don’t love me anymore *sniff*sniff* NO!! DON’T TRY TO HUG ME. Since you took up the Darjeeling project, you are always busy. You don’t have time for me*sniff*sniff* I should have asked Di to accompany when she offered that she’ll come to take care of me”

“Khushi!! Pls stop crying. Come on Khushi! We both wanted some time alone from all the drama in Shanthivan. I’m so sorry sweetheart.*Ummch*  You know I didn’t mean to get angry.*Ummch* I was afraid that something had happened to u.*Ummmch* What’ll I do without You and our baby?“

“No!! stop kissing me Arnavji! I’m angry on u. I’m…….*Ummmmm* stop*Ummmmm* kissing*Ummmmm* me*Ummmmmm*”

“U talk too much Khushi. Let’s go to our room”

“Put me down LaardGovernor!!! I won’t let you touch me until you give me wheelbarrow ride. PUT ME DOWN”

“Oho Khushi!!! Not again. Where will I go for wheelbarrow now? And its not safe for you Khushi. I’ll give you wheelbarrow ride after your pregnancy sweetheart. You are my sweet Khushi right? Come on baby. I know you too need me now. Don’t make your Pathiparameshwar wait”

“No I won’t let you. There is a wheelbarrow in the nearby park. I have seen it when I went to walking. Put me down!.”

“Khushi what people’ll think if they see the famous ASR giving a cart ride? ”

“Hahn!! Your image is more important than my wish?!! YOUR PREGNANT WIFE’S WISH?!! Our room has come. PUT ME DOWN LAARDGOVERNOR!!”

“Ok! Ok! Here.. I have put you down. Khushi pls don’t start crying again. Fine!! We’ll go early morning when there is no one. Now happy?”

“Oh Arnavji!!! U are the bestest and sweetest hubby in the whole world. I love you!!”

“I don’t want your love in words Mrs.Raizada. I’m gonna make love to u whole night that you won’t be able to wake up early in the morning.”

“Dream on Mr. Raizada!! I’ll wake u up for the ride.*Ummch*”

“No more talking wifey.”

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“Hey DeviMaiyya!! I’m soooo excited Arnavji!!”

“Khushi don’t make much noise. I have paid the watchman not to let anyone till we are here. Ok hurry up. Where is that cart?”

“There it is Arnavji!! Haiyya!!”

“Khushi it is so rusty. Is it safe?”

“Oho Arnavji!! You have to let yourself go sometime. Don’t restrict yourself”

“OK Mrs.Raizada! wait a minute”

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“Here Khushi! I have filled it with dry leaves as a cushion. I would have filled it with red rose petals if you aren’t so adamant about going today itself. HEY!! What happened? You are hugging me in public?”

“Shut up Laardgovernor!! I’m hugging my lovable Arnavji. I love him so much and no one is here. Shut up!!”

“U can shut me with your lips too baby.. You know? As you said there is no one here”

“SHUT UP AND GIVE ME RIDE LAARDGOVERNOR!!”

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“Arnavji!! A little more speed! “

“NO Khushi! Its sloppy. You’ll fall down. HEY!! Why are you throwing leaves at me?”

“Ha Ha Ha!! U are such a baby sometimes Arnavji!! Take this too my lovable Laardgovernor”

“YOU ARE CRAZY MRS.RAIZADA!! Ha ha ha!!”

“I love you Arnavji!”

“You have no idea how much I love you Khushi!!”

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“Khushi!! Have you got ready? We have to go to your 8th month scan. Di too wants to come. KHUSHI IS THIS THE TIME TO WATCH TV?”

“ARNAVJI!! ARNAVJI! See this scene!! How the hero is carrying the heroine to the 14th floor as lift is not working. Can you too carry me?”

“NOOOOOO!!!! I will carry you forever Khushi!! BUT NOT NOW!! Oh no! Pls don’t start to cry again baby….”

 

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 Thats it guys :)) hope u enjoyed:) If you have noticed I tried to write with only dialogues for the first time.. 

I hope U could picture the scenario just with the dialogues..

This is my first attempt in this zonal. Pls bear with it if u find any mistakes LOVE U ALL

Pls sweeties!!!! the comments r taken into 

account for marks. So if u like the one shot, 

Pls pls plsss comment me atleast a word if u 

appreciate my work:(((

 

 

 

 

 

Jun 5, 2015

Thank u soo much dearies :)))) (By Vsahi) (Thanked: 18 times)

Thank u soo much for ur great response for my small piece of os sweeties :)) I dunno if i could respond u after tomorrow so im giving u all my thanks now itself :))) Thanks for Tainar Di that i could try something new this time :)))



Krithika_Rshi - Thank u soo much Krithi :))) U r such a sweetheart :*** I too pitied arnav but actually its all my secret wishes ;)  and that movie wre hero carry heroine foe 14 floors is a tamil song from ratchagan movie;) if u wanna see it here is the link ;))


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Jun 6, 2015

liked it?? NEVER... (By Chutianju) (Thanked: 7 times)

I don't like it.... I love it akka... It was awesome and crazy.... My command box is not working.... So only wrote a view.... Thus khushi na... Gets whatever she want with that innocent puppy dog face of hers... Pity arnavji.... I am sure she must have made him lift her.. . drama queen... My pity arnav ji.... He would have back pain by now because of lifting her..... I loved it akka... It a good come back.... Ummah... Love u....and ur stories too...

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