OS: Farewell's payback

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May 21, 2015

OS: Farewell's payback (By Nakshathra) (Thanked: 133 times)

After a long time written something in the name of OS, let me know how is it...

Today it was a big day for me, finally I completed my three years course successfully and today its our farewell. I feel now only I stepped into my college but it going to be completion of third year. For others, it is farewell day but for me it is more than that because today I m going to propose my man. I m nervous but I have to do, else some chudeil will take him away. In my college he is the greek god for all gals, handsome meaning itself less in front of him. Today I din confess means then never I can, he planned to go to states after completing our exams so this is the time to express my love. He need to know I khushi kumari Gupta madly sincerely fell in love with him. Now I need to buy one ring for him, with empty hand I proposed means it wont be nice. 

I went to jewellery shop and asked for men rings they showed me which section. I saw some designs and in that I selected one. I asked him to pack it. I m lost thinking how I going to propose with this ring. Shop keeper came and gave me the ring. I went to pay bill in lost thought. Without realizing this is jewellary shop, I asked, bhaiya here buy 1 get 1 free offer not aa..... He looked at me with wide eyes like I m one alien. He composed himself and said, this is not provision store or textiles to put that kind of offer. I slapped myself when I realized what I asked and where I asked. I smiled sheepishly saying, sorry got habituated by asking in shops. He replied, nice habit... Next time while asking first see in which shop you are standing then ask. I stick out my tongue and came out. After coming to home I slept for sometime. 

At evening, I got ready wearing red color single piece dress which is upto my knee and my dress fitting my body perfectly. After taking my silver clutch I started to go for my farewell. I reached my college in twenty minutes. When I entered every one praised me, my dress and my curly hairstyle which made me to get some confidence. I scanned everyone to get glimpse of him but he is not here. Everyone enjoying and having fun with their Friends but I can't able to, only because of him.

I spotted NK finally, I rushed to him he looked at me in surprise. I said without wasting my time I need to say something to you. He replied, of course khushi you can say anything to me. I said in nervous no not here, just come with me. We both went out of the hall, and moved towards garden which is near to parking area. Before he ask anything. I kneel down in front of him. He was shocked and asked, khushi what is this. I said with puppy face, please Nk let me finish first. Nk uttered, but...I said, please... Nk nodded as yes.

 I closed and opened my eyes to gather my courage, clearing my throat I started to say, I don't know when and how this feeling started to occupy me, it may be on the first time when you paid for my chocolates or it may be on the time when you held me, when I was about to fall. Till now I secretly admired you and still doing, today is our farewell day for all us. But I don't want to bid good bye from you. So today I m confessing you I m khushi kumari Gupta madly and sincerely fell in love with you.... I showed ring in front of him. He is baffled I know, I tried to say something. 

Suddenly I noticed one figure moving from there. I looked at person, oh s*h*i*t!!! Arnav... I screamed his name, Arnnavvvv...He turned and looked at me. I said still without getting up from knee position, I need to say something. Arnav looked at me in anger, but why. He said in gritted teeth, I don't wanna hear anything, you continue your proposal. I asked, it means you heard it all. He replied in anger, yes. I said, then its good I m just practising. Arnav asked me in confusion, for what... I replied with glee, to propose you. Arnav uttered, oh...then his eyes went wide telling what the.... I said, yes I m practising with him how to propose you...just one trail nothing much. He gave horrified expression. I think he is in shock. I called him, Arnav can you come here... He asked, why.. I said again, just come... Please for me. He came near to me. I looked at Nk who standing like statue, poor guy got more confused I think. I said, Nk thanks for coming with me...now you can go, you go and enjoy our farewell. He gaped at me, hitting his head he left from there.

 I looked at arnav and said, Arnav already you heard what I m going to say so directly coming to the point, will you marry me? He looking me with blank expression just in silence. I said making puppy face, please say yes more than ten minutes I m kneeling down like kid who din submit her homework. He chuckled and gave his hand to pull me up. But I put ring on his finger he was shocked. Finally I got up saying, now my 15000Rs ring is on your finger which nerve is directly connect to your heart so you need to accept my love. He was amused and asked with smirk which will make gals to die for it, what if I pay back... I screamed, noooo...no arnav you cant, dont do this to me...dont break my cute little heart, it dont have spare parts. He slid inside his pocket, I felt dejected seeing him going to give me money for that ring, rich brat he is 15000rs and all pocket money for him. 

Suddenly he pulled my hand my eyes started to get moist. I felt something sliding on my ring finger, when I looked I m shocked to see, Arnav putting diamond ring on my finger...damn it...I can't believe it... I grinned showing my visible white teeth. He smiled and said, its pay back... I asked with glint, what about mutual pay. He got confused, what.. I jumped in his arms saying follow me I slammed his lips, he din respond at start due to shock but later we enjoyed our first kiss and sealed our love. 

Comments plz...:-) 

May 23, 2015

Oh my sweeties !!! (By Nakshathra) (Thanked: 18 times)

Awwww....Is this my OS, can't believe it, I mean not for my writing but for your response. I expected nearly 1000 views 50 thanks 5 comments. But again you guys amazed me. Nealy after one year I written OS, whenever I think to write OS, it will change to SS. Many writers submitted their OS for competition, but I wrote it simply just thinking its long time I din written any OS in this one year. My all OS are crazy and funny except one. Thank you for your comments and thanks. After seeing your response I m satisfied with my OS. 

Many readers asked me about buy 1 get 1 offer, how you written it....only you can write like this...from where you getting this ideas.....And my answer is, for me its not big deal.... I used to ask almost in all shops about this offer and they will give sometimes chocolate or even the same stuff as free if I bought any small things with less price. Still I cant forget one time in jewellery shop while mom paying bill I asked, uncle Is there buy 1 get 1 offer ? He spitted his coffee hearing my question with wide eyes. I grinned ear to ear. Mom muttered at me, you will never change.... He he he.....Many moments are there which will make me smile whenever I recalled it. Whatever crazy things I m writing, somewhat all related to me, I just modifying accord to my story. So for me its easy to write. Hope you got answers.....:-) :-) 

See you guys in my stories, when.... I cant say, if I get enough time I will update. In June I need to finish my three stories because I m going to take break in july. Hope everything will go well.... Take care guys...keep smiling:-) 

Lots of luv,


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